Writing Tips
Punctuating Dialogue
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➸ “This is a sentence.”
➸ “This is a sentence with a dialogue tag at the end,” she said.
➸ “This,” he said, “is a sentence split by a dialogue tag.”
➸ “This is a sentence,” she said. “This is a new sentence. New sentences are capitalized.”
➸ “This is a sentence followed by an action.” He stood. “They are separate sentences because he did not speak by standing.”
➸ She said, “Use a comma to introduce dialogue. The quote is capitalized when the dialogue tag is at the beginning.”
➸ “Use a comma when a dialogue tag follows a quote,” he said.
“Unless there is a question mark?” she asked.
“Or an exclamation point!” he answered. “The dialogue tag still remains uncapitalized because it’s not truly the end of the sentence.”
➸ “Periods and commas should be inside closing quotations.”
➸ “Hey!” she shouted, “Sometimes exclamation points are inside quotations.”
However, if it’s not dialogue exclamation points can also be “outside”!
➸ “Does this apply to question marks too?” he asked.
If it’s not dialogue, can question marks be “outside”? (Yes, they can.)
➸ “This applies to dashes too. Inside quotations dashes typically express—“
“Interruption” — but there are situations dashes may be outside.
➸ “You’ll notice that exclamation marks, question marks, and dashes do not have a comma after them. Ellipses don’t have a comma after them either…” she said.
➸ “My teacher said, ‘Use single quotation marks when quoting within dialogue.’”
➸ “Use paragraph breaks to indicate a new speaker,” he said.
“The readers will know it’s someone else speaking.”
➸ “If it’s the same speaker but different paragraph, keep the closing quotation off.
“This shows it’s the same character continuing to speak.”
I hope every writer who sees this writes LOADS the next few months. Like freetime opens up, no writers block, the ability to focus, etc etc you're able to write loads & make lots of progress <3
Happy Year of the Dragon!
I love the idea of kintsugi so here's a porcelain dragon that highlights the broken seams with gold. Despite all the pains of hardships in life, we are beautiful.
I skip and trip down the stairs
tag yourself. do you skitter, scuttle, scurry, or scamper.
Silver payals wrap around ankles
Jingling with every step of a dance
Every verse in a hymn rung in a temple’s door
One, two, three, four
Practicing the rhythm with suns on your feet
Larkstone bright, henna deep rich and tucked in a drawer
One, two, three, four, five, six
Lemon, turmeric, and curd with chickpea flour mixed
Apply until the sun drips from your skin
One, two, three, four
Cameras flash like a thousand suns
Scalding heat until your breath constricts
The stage is bigger than your parents’ bed
You look so cultural; I have to take a photo.
Exhale for six seconds again.
switch up your verbs (part one) ~
walked - hiked - moved - shuffled - toddled - sauntered - ambled - tiptoed - meandered - strolled
laughed - chortled - chuckled - giggled - snorted - guffawed - howled - snickered - shrieked
wanted - ached for - wished - craved - coveted - fancied - pined - aspired
ran - sprinted - galloped - scampered - bolted - trotted - dashed - raced - jogged
jumped - bounced - hopped - leapt - hurtled - vaulted - barged - bounded
ꜱᴡɪᴛᴄʜ ᴜᴘ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴠᴇʀʙꜱ (ᴘᴀʀᴛ ᴛᴡᴏ) ~
love admire adore cherish yearn for fancy treasure
laugh chuckle giggle snort crow chortle guffaw cackle
shout cheer screech scream bark call yell
move run walk back away sprint turn jump duck
look glance focus eye survey study sight spot
whisper murmur mutter breathe intone hiss mouth
Eugene Thacker, "Nine Disputations on Theology and Horror", Collapse: Philosophical Research and Development, Vol. IV
Peace and blessings upon everyone!
I hope life's treating you well. I’m Esmeray and I welcome you to this post on my blog Dear Esmeray.
Today's post is for my fellow writers here. I'll be sharing with you character archetypes for you to use in your books.
The Warrior
The Child
The Orphan
The Guardian
The Mentor
The Caregiver
The Rebel
The Leader
The Ruler
The Lover
The Everyman
The Joker/Jester
The Explorer
The Hero
The Outlaw
The Villian
The Tyrant
The Bastard Child
The Sadist
The Evil Genius
The Terrorist
The Lunatic
The Black Widow
The Schemer
The Anti-Hero
The SideKick
The Traitor
I hope this post helped you assign an archetype to your beloved OCs or perhaps inspired your newest OC.
With love, Esmeray ♡
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The publishers did not care about those books in the first place but they did this anyway because they have vendetta against open access.
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