No lie, reading these chapters has made me fall back in love with the clones and inspired me to write fanfics about them again
Liar Liar (Part 7/?)
Part 7 - The Truth // <<< Part Six
𫧠Pairings: Commander Fox X Female!Reader
𫧠word count: 4.5k
đŤ§Chapter Summary: With questions and gossip spiralling out of control, Fox takes action and takes you on a date to break the news. However, it doesn't go exactly to plan.
đŤ§Chapter Warnings: safe for work, flirty texts, flirting, reader wearing a red dress, heavy angst, crying, heartbreak, trust issues, comfort, accidental confessions.
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    "Hound, can I have a word?" It was the next day, and during your lunch break, you spotted Hound lingering by the counter, balancing a tray of food while waiting for the next available seat. The moment you saw him, the urge to speak to him flared up, overriding your initial plan to just grab something to eat and return to your desk.
Excusing yourself, you wove through the crowd of officers and troopers, brushing past shoulders until you reached him just before he could sit down.
The Sergeant blinked in surprise at your sudden appearanceâthough even more at the clear irritation in your tone. That alone was enough to catch his attention. You werenât usually one to sound so bothered.
Adjusting his grip on his tray, he arched a brow. âEverything alright?â
You ignored the question and tilted your head, gesturing for him to follow. Hound hesitated briefly but ultimately sighed and followed you out of earshot of the bustling mess hall.
Once you were in a quiet enough spot, you turned to face him, arms crossed. âWant to tell me why Thire and Stone think me and Commander Fox are a âthingâ?â
His mouth opened, then promptly closed. He awkwardly glanced to the side, shifting on his feet like a guilty cadet caught sneaking extra rations. âYeah⌠about that⌠thatâs, uh, my error.â
âYeah, it is, â you echoed sharply. âWhy would you say something like that? What even made you think that in the first place?â
He let out an uncomfortable chuckle, rubbing the back of his neck. âIt was just an observation.â
âAn observation ?â You huffed, throwing your hands in the air. âHound, me and Fox barely speak. â
âI know, I know,â he said quickly, shifting his tray from one hand to the other, âI just⌠I donât know, I thought I noticed something.â
You gave him a flat stare. âLike what?â
He hesitated, choosing his next words carefully. âLike the way he looks at you.â
Your brows shot up. âThe way he looks at me?â
âForget I said anything,â he muttered, shaking his head. âI shouldnât have said anything in the first place.â
You sighed, pressing a hand to your forehead. âWell, does Fox know about this ridiculous gossip?â
Hound frowned. âOf course not.â
âGood. And I donât want him to know.â
The last thing you needed was for Commander Fox to hear about this. The man already carried the weight of Coruscantâs security on his shouldersâhe did not need to be burdened with some absurd rumor about the two of you.
But then, a thought struck you.
You lowered your hand, eyes narrowing slightly as a memory resurfacedâFox and Hound, standing in the hangar yesterday. It had looked⌠tense. Almost heated.
Frowning, you tilted your head. âThat reminds me, what was that about yesterday?â
Hound stiffened, lips pressing into a firm line. âWhat was what about?â
âThe conversation you had with Fox in the hangar.â You studied him carefully. âLooked serious. â
There was conflict in his gaze. Hesitation. But after a moment, he sighed and shook his head. âNothing worth worrying about. A patrol went wrong. Thatâs all.â
You watched him closely, trying to gauge whether or not that was the whole truth.
But eventually, you nodded. âAlright,â you said, relieved that at least it wasnât about you.
Hound exhaled, the tension in his shoulders easing slightly. âSorry about the gossip. I really didnât mean for it to spread.â
You rolled your eyes, but the irritation had mostly faded. âJust⌠maybe keep your â observationsâ to yourself next time.â You mutter, using air quotations.
He held up his hands. âDuly noted.â
â â ââââąŕźşâŻ đŚ ŕźťâ°ââââ â
Fox was a kriffing mess.
The situation with you was spiralling out of controlâa beautiful disaster he couldnât bring himself to stop.
He had tangled himself in a lie so foolish, so reckless , it made his stomach churn. But the way you spoke to him, the way you laughed, the way you flirted with Whisky ⌠Stars, he had never wanted anything more.
And then, there was that officer .
Fox had seen the way the man looked at you in the hangar. It was painfully obviousâsquared shoulders, a little too eager, the way his eyes lingered when you smiled. Kriff, it almost hurt. Â
It shouldnât have affected him. It had no right to affect him. But it did. A hot coil of something ugly, possessive, wrapped around his ribs at the sight. Another man looking at you the way he did.
And then there was Hound.
Fox clenched his jaw as his mind replayed the words from the hangar.
"You havenât told her? I swear, Fox, if you donât in the next few days, I will. She deserves better.â
He hated how involved Hound was in this. Hated that he was right .
He needed to tell you the truth. But how selfish would it be if he stretched this out just a little longer?
Even now, hidden in a dimly lit storage closetâfar away from the constant questions about Rik Waldar , away from his brothers, away from you âhe found himself rereading your messages from last night. Stars, he was smitten.
And from your replies, so were you.
He squeezed his eyes shut, exhaling sharply through his nose. âNo. Stop it, Fox,â he muttered under his breath.
Yet, later that night, when the barracks had gone quiet and all his brothers were sleeping, he still found himself sneaking back to his office. Just to sit there, datapad in hand, waiting for your next message.
And tonight was no exception.
So, any pretty girls at the new base?
A smirk tugged at his lips at your message. Were you the jealous type?
None as pretty as you.
It didnât take long for you to respond.
Ugh. You are smooth. Ever been told that before?
Once or twice. Why? Is it working?
He leaned back in his chair, waiting, knowing youâd take a moment to compose yourself. Sure enough, a minute later you reply.
Maybe. But I already like you, so you donât have to try that hard.
Foxâs heart stopped. For a brief second, he forgot how to breathe. His hand tightened around the datapad, reading the words over and over again.
You already liked him.
Shit.
His fingers hovered over the keys, mind racing with what to say and how to respond without giving away too much. But before he could, another message came through.
Hound said something weird to me today, by the way.
His stomach twisted.
Weird how?
Apparently, he thinks I have a thing for Commander Fox.
Fox stiffened, eyes locked onto the screen, pulse thrumming in his ears.
Do you?
Your reply came fast. Too fast.
Pfft. Not a chance. Heâs uptight and irritable all the time. Itâs exhausting just being near him. He even walked me back to the station the other day and I felt so awkward.
Fox felt that one like a punch to the gut.
Damn. You really didnât like him. Not as Fox, anyway.
He swallowed hard, forcing himself to keep his tone casual.
What if heâs just misunderstood?
Then he should try being less of an arse. Not my problem.
Fox exhaled slowly through his nose, tapping his fingers against the desk before taking a big gulp of caf. Stars, maybe he should have let you go on a caf run. That machine really is terrible. Anyway, he wasnât sure why he asked what came nextâmaybe because, despite everything, he wanted to hear your answer: Is it just the attitude? Or are looks a factor too?
A pause. Thenâ
Dunno. Never seen his face, so I couldnât say.
Fox stared at your message for a long moment. The truth sat heavy in his chest, but he still found himself typing.
Do looks matter?
Not really. But itâs nice to put a face to a name.
He runs a hand over his face, groaning softly into it. Right, he had to get this over and done with.Â
Meanwhile back at your place, you lay sprawled out on your stomach, datapad clutched between your hands, grinning so hard it almost hurt.
Do you want to go on a date with me tomorrow?
The words had sent your heart into a fluttering mess, your feet instinctively kicking the air behind you as your mind instantly leapt to one question: What the hell am I going to wear?
Your fingers flew over the keyboard as you typed out a response, still biting back a smile.
Not going to ditch me this time?
His reply was immediate.
I promise.
You exhaled softly, rolling onto your back as your eyes flickered toward your wardrobe. You werenât sure what kind of date Whisky had in mind, but that didnât stop you from mentally sorting through every outfit you owned, already imagining what heâd like.
What kind of date did you have in mind?
One where I wine and dine you.
Your grin grew as you typed back.
I hope thereâs dessert.
There will be.
Stars . If he kept this up, you were going to be insufferable tomorrow.
But as your excitement buzzed, a nagging thought tugged at the back of your mind. The hangar.
That moment when he had rushed off like something urgent was happening; only for you to later find out that there hadnât been an issue at all. No escaped prisoner, no commotion. And then there was the thing he had been meaning to tell you.
You chewed your lip before hesitantly typing,
Will you tell me what you wanted to? Back in the meadow?
There was a slight pause before he replied.
Yes, I will. Please donât worry. It will be okay.
You really hoped so.
Your stomach twisted slightly at the possibilities. Heâd assured you there was no other woman, so that ruled out one terrifying thought. But what if it was something worse? Was he ill? Was there something serious he wasnât telling you?
You grimaced, quickly pushing the thought aside before you could spiral.
Instead, you let your fingers brush over the keys, heart lightening as you typed,
You know, you really make me happy.
His response came quickly.
Good. Because you make me happy too.
That warm, giddy feeling spread through your chest, and before you could stop yourself, you let your fingers hover before typing something a little more⌠bold.
If the date goes well⌠maybe Iâll reward you.
There was a pause for a small moment. You feared maybe you were too bold but then:
Yeah? And what kind of reward are we talking about?
You grinned wickedly, rolling onto your side, fingers teasing the screen as you debated just how far you wanted to push him.
Oh, you know. Something worth being good for.
This time, the pause was longer.
Then, finallyâ
Youâre going to be the death of me, sweetheart.
And you laughed, fully, out loud, feeling your cheeks heat at the thought of Whisky, wherever he was, probably losing his mind right now.
But what you didnât know was that Fox was losing his mind.
Fox leaned back in his chair, his head tipping against the wall as he let out a slow, controlled breath through his nose. His datapad rested against his stomach, his free hand dragging down his face in frustration.
Or maybe desperation.
Because, stars, you were killing him. It wasnât fair. It wasnât fair. And it was his fault.
The way you flirted with himâunknowingly flirting with Fox âhad him spiraling into dangerous waters. He felt warm, restless, an ache settling low in his stomach as his body reacted far too eagerly to the teasing words on the screen.
And that last message?
"Something worth being good for." He repeats in a whisper. His jaw clenched as he exhaled sharply, the heat of it crawling down his spine. He needed to stop this. He needed to stop before he said something incredibly stupid.Â
I have to go.
Your response was instant.
So soon?
Yeah. Before I say something I shouldnât.
Fox ran a hand through his hair, trying to will away the heat still simmering under his skin. Yep, he was certainly turned on right now.
Meet me tomorrow at 1900, west sector entrance. Dress nice.
Oh? Dress nice? Are you taking me somewhere fancy, Whisky?
Fox smirked, fingers gliding smoothly over the screen.
Youâll see. Sweet dreams, sweetheart.
He was just about to shut off the datapad when a new message came through.
Wait!
His thumb hovered over the screen. He exhaled slowly, waiting, heart thudding just a little faster than it should.
I miss seeing you.
A quiet chuckle rumbled in his chest as he leaned back in his chair, his smirk returning.
Seeing me? Sweetheart, how do you think I feel? I canât even see your beautiful face.
Smooth. He had to give himself creditâhe was good at this. The easy flirting, the charm, the teasing. It was second nature by now.
But the moment your next message appeared, the confidence wavered.
Do you want to see me?
His breath hitched. His tongue pressed against the inside of his cheek as warmth spread in his chestâŚand a little lower.
That was flirty. And enticing.
His hand flexed against his thigh before quickly tapping out a response, keeping it light.
See you, how?
The three dots appeared for what felt like forever and a day until:
Donât be thinking naughty thoughts, Whisky. Only my face.
Fox let out a breath he hadnât realised he was holding. Kriff. That was a relief. Not that he would have gone through with it if it had been something more, but still⌠He wasnât sure how much self-control he had left after tonightâs teasing.
Then, a new message. A file attachment. Fox swallowed thickly as his thumb hovered for half a second before tapping it open.
And stars aboveâ
His breath stalled in his throat.
It was just a picture of your face, nothing more, nothing scandalousâjust you in bed, your head resting on your pillow, strands of hair messy around your face, lips parted ever so slightly, eyes soft and warm.
Beautiful.
Perfect.
He blinked, his chest tightening with something he didnât want to name. Instead, his fingers moved on instinct.
Youâre perfect.
And with that, he shut off the datapad, tossing it onto his desk before dragging his hands down his face with a long, suffering groan.
Tomorrow was going to kill him.
â â ââââąŕźşâŻ đŚ ŕźťâ°ââââ â
1900 hours. Dressed to impress. West Sector. Gift in back pocket.
Fox paced, his hands shoved deep into his pockets, his white button-up crisp against his toned frame. The sleeves were neatly rolled up, a careful balance of refined and relaxed, but the way he kept shifting his weight gave away his nerves.
He had been replaying this moment for hours. What to say. How to act. How not to mess this up. All because he had accepted a note from you at 79âs.
"What was I thinking?" He muttered under his breath.
âHey, handsome.â
Fox turned so fast he nearly stumbled, eyes widening.
And kriff, he was glad he did.
There you stood, bathed in the golden glow of Coruscantâs streetlights, dressed in deep redâthe colours of the Guard. The dress hugged your figure in a way that made his throat go dry, and your heels only added to the effortless confidence you carried.
For a moment, he could only stare.
âWow,â he breathed, the word slipping out before he could stop it.
The smile you gave him in return? Yeah, he was in trouble.
âOh, stop it,â you teased, stepping closer, hands tucked behind your back. âYou look very dashing, Whisky .â
He exhaled a soft chuckle, rubbing his hands together as if that would stop the heat creeping up his neck. âThanks,â he murmured. Clearing his throat, he extended an arm. âShall we?â
You took it without hesitation, slipping your hand into the crook of his elbow, the warmth of your touch searing through the fabric of his sleeve. Your perfume drifted closeâlight, sweet, and enough to scramble his thoughts.
As he flagged down a cab, you glanced at him curiously when he rattled off an address.
âSomewhere special?â
Fox smirked. âSomewhere deserving of you.â
Your stomach flipped in excitement.
The ride was short, but that didnât stop him from slipping an arm around your shoulders, pulling you into his side. It was easy, effortlessâlike this had always been a habit between you. Soft conversation flowed between the two of you, words dipped in laughter and teasing as the city lights blurred outside the window.
When you arrived, your breath caught.
Fox helped you out of the cab, his hand resting lightly on the small of your back as he guided you forward. The restaurant was breathtaking. Twinkling fairy lights draped across wooden beams, casting a golden glow over the space. Trellises overflowed with soft blossoms, their fragrance mingling with the cool evening air. A fountain gurgled softly in the center of the courtyard, its quiet song blending with the hum of conversation.
He had gone all out.
Fox pulled out your chair, waiting for you to settle before taking his own.
âWell, Whisky ,â you giggled, resting your arms on the table, âyouâre full of surprises.â
He smirked, pouring you both a glass of wine from a bottle swiftly delivered by a server. âYou think so?â
âI know so.â You raised your glass, tapping it lightly against his before taking a sip. âHow many girls have you brought here?â
His brow lifted slightly. âWould you believe me if I said none?â
You narrowed your eyes, playful. âI donât know. You are a smooth talker.â
Fox chuckled, shaking his head as he glanced down at the menu. You watched him for a moment, admiring the way the dim lighting softened his features, how the corners of his mouth twitched when he was focused.
Then, something shifted.
His shoulders tensed, fingers tightening around the menu, his usual air of confidence faltering ever so slightly.
Your smile faded, just a touch. âHey,â you said softly, reaching across the table to place your hand over his. âYou okay?â
Fox blinked, snapping back to the moment. He looked at your handâwarm, steady, groundingâbefore clearing his throat and reaching for his drink.
âY-yeah,â he said, voice not quite as smooth as before. He took a long sip, setting the glass down carefully. âSorry. Just⌠nervous.â
You squeezed his hand gently before pulling back, offering him a reassuring smile. âItâs just me, Whisky. Nobody else.â
His jaw tightened for a moment, like he was biting back words.
You were. He wasnât.
Then, he exhaled slowly and sat up straighter. âI know,â he murmured. âAnd Iâm lucky you are.â
The tension melted just as quickly as it had come, and soon enough, conversation flowed again. The wine disappeared steadily, the appetisers arrived, and between bites, you found yourself giggling at his dry humour, your foot grazing his leg beneath the table.
âCareful,â Fox murmured, smirking against the rim of his glass.
You tilted your head, feigning innocence. âCareful of what?â
His smirk deepened. âYou know exactly what.â
âMm. Do I?â You dragged the tip of your shoe just a little higher up his calf, watching the way his fingers twitched against his glass.
Fox exhaled sharply, setting his drink down with deliberate care.
âYouâre playing with fire,â he warned, voice lower now.
You bit back a smile, taking a slow sip of wine. âThen I hope youâre fireproof.â
His fingers drummed against the table, gaze locked onto yoursâdark, unreadable, utterly consumed. Then, with a quick glance around, as if double-checking your privacy, he reached into his back pocket.
âBefore I forgetâŚâ he started, voice softer now, something almost uncertain laced within it. âI should give you your gift.â
You sat up a little straighter, warmth rushing to your cheeks as he placed a small, square box in front of you.
Your fingers brushed over the lid, heartbeat picking up. âA gift?â
Fox rubbed the back of his neck, eyes flickering to yours before he nodded. âItâs nothing huge, butâŚâ He opened the box, revealing a delicate bracelet insideâa single red gem dangling from the thin band.
âOh, Whisky,â you breathed, a grin appearing as you carefully lifted it from the box. The craftsmanship was exquisite, the weight of it cool against your skin. âItâs beautiful. Thank you.â
The tension in his shoulders eased at the sincerity in your voice. âBeautiful,â he murmured, fingers ghosting over your wrist as he latched it on for you, âlike you.â
It was easy to get lost in this, lost in him.
For a little while, nothing else mattered.
For a little while, everything was perfect.
And then, in an instant, it wasnât.
Your eyes drift over Foxâs shoulder, catching sight of a familiar figure. âOh, hey! Itâs Pia. You okay if I go say hi?â
Fox glanced back too, spotting Pia by the reception desk. She hadn't seen either of you yet, focused on whatever she was waiting for. âSure,â he said lightly. âJust donât go running off on me.â
You humoured him with a smile, brushing a hand over his shoulder as you passed.
âPia?â
She turned at the sound of your voice, her face lighting up instantly. âHey, you!â She pulled you into a quick hug, then leaned back, eyeing you with approval. âDamn, girl, you look sexy.â
You laughed, giving her a mock twirl. âDoing my best. Iâm on a date.â
âOh, same! Though mineâs late.â She rolled her eyes but grinned anyway. âWhoâs the lucky guy?â
You nodded back toward your table. Piaâs gaze followed, her brows lifting slightly.
âWell, well,â she mused, chuckling. âDidnât think the Commander had it in him.â
Your smile remains but sudden confusion surfaces.
âHm?â
Pia glanced at you, still grinning. âI mean, I saw you two all cosy at 79âs. Figured you had a thing for him.â
You blinked, tilting your head. âSure, but Whisky isnât a Commander .â
Something shifted in Piaâs expression.
She looked back at Fox still sitting there, unaware, completely at ease. Then back at you.
ââŚWhisky?â
A cold unease settled over you. âYeah.â
Piaâs lips parted, her arms crossing over her chest. âI donât think Iâve ever met a Whisky ,â she said carefully. âAnd that? That isnât one.â
Your stomach turned. âWhat are you saying?â
She hesitated, then exhaled. âThatâs Fox. â
The world around you dulled into nothing. Your mouth opened, but no words came. âSay that again.â
Piaâs confidence wavered, her grin long gone. âLove⌠I told you who he was that night.â Her brows knit together. âI thought you knew .â
No.
No, she hadnât told you. She had been about to, but then a patron had called for her, and the moment had slipped away. You had never questioned it. Had never thought to.
It wasnât true. It couldnât be.
Your head shook, a sickening drop in your stomach. âHe⌠he told me his name was Whisky.â
Pia shifted uncomfortably, glancing between you and the man you thought you knew. âWaitâm-maybe it is,â she fumbled, grasping for something, anything to take back what she had just said. âI mean, heâs a clone, right? They all look the same, maybeââ
Her desperate excuse fell apart the second the next voice cut through the restaurant.
â Fox! What are you doing here?â
Your blood ran cold.
Pia spun first, but you couldnât move, couldnât breathe.
The voice belonged to Thire. He was walking straight toward your table, waving like it was nothing.
Fox stood quickly, his entire body stiff, hand raising in a useless attempt to silence his brother.
It was too late.
You felt him look at you.
Your eyes locked onto his, and in that moment, your heart shattered.
Everything you had built, every moment, every wordâ a lie.
A sharp breath lodged in your throat. You didnât speak. Couldnât. The weight in your chest threatened to crush you, and all you could do was turn on your heel and walk.
Noâ run.
Pia called your name, but you barely heard her. The restaurant blurred past, the cool air of the street hitting your face as you pushed through the doors. Your heart pounded in your ears, drowning out the noise of passing speeders and distant chatter.
Somewhere behind you, voices rose in argumentâPiaâs unmistakable fury, sharp and cutting.
And thenâ
â Wait! â
Your breath hitched, legs faltering as you came to an abrupt stop.
Footsteps. Heels against pavement. Pia.
She caught up, panting slightly, hands gripping your wrists the second she reached you.
âI donât understand,â you choked, a sob clawing its way to the surface. Your hands covered your mouth, shaking. âWhy would he do this?â
Piaâs own frustration simmered beneath her concern, her jaw tight. âI donât know, love.â She squeezed your hands. âI donât have a clue what was going through his mind.â
The tears came too fast, hot and relentless. You tried to wipe them away, but it was useless. The pain of it, the humiliation âit burned like fire beneath your skin.
Pia didnât hesitate. She pulled you close, her arms wrapping around you as you broke. âD-did he want to hurt me?â Your voice was barely there, raw and shaking. âI donâtâ I donât get it. â
She exhaled a slow, miserable sigh, resting her chin atop your head. âI⌠I couldnât tell you.â
But you could tell her.
And oh, did you have answers. âHe never liked me,â you whispered, hiccuping between sobs. âFoxâhe was always rude to me. Itâs like he wanted to play with me.â
A look flickered across Piaâs face. One you couldnât read.
âWould he do that?â she asked, voice hesitant. âReally?â
You pulled back slightly, pressing a trembling hand over your chest, trying to steady your breath. âW-why lie about who he was? He always talked about FoxâFox this, Fox that.â Your stomach twisted. âWas he justâjust trying to figure out what I didnât like about him? Was this some kind ofâof sick joke?â
It didnât make sense. None of it made sense.
Your mind raced in circles, spinning, grasping for answers you didnât have. âAm I a bad person?â you asked, barely above a whisper.
Pia didnât hesitate. âNo.â She shook her head, voice firm. âYouâre a kind-hearted person, and some idiot wanted to test that.â
It should have been comforting. It wasnât.
Because none of it changed the truth.
âOhâoh, stars. â A fresh wave of dread crashed over you. âThire! Heâs going to tell everyone . â Your breath came faster, panic swelling. âI canâtâI canât ââ
âShh.â Pia took a deep breath, rubbing your arms in soothing circles. âIâll make sure he doesnât say a thing.â She reached into her bag, fishing out her key fob and pressing it into your trembling hands. âGo back to my place. Iâll be right behind you. You remember where I live?â
Your fingers curled around the fob, mind swimming. You nodded shakily. âO-okay. I think so. What are you doing?â
Pia scoffs. Tying her hair up, she adjusted her bag on her shoulder.
âGiving Fox another piece of my mind before he comes looking for you.â
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The aftermath of an attack always came in waves.
Smoke cleared. Evidence was gathered. People lied. And then, the survivors were expected to sit in rooms like this and act like it hadnât shaken them.
Bailâs office was quiet, the kind of quiet only the dangerously exhausted and the politically cornered could create. A few low-voiced aides bustled around the outer corridor, but inside the room, it was only the senators.
Organa stood by the tall window, arms crossed as he stared down at the Coruscant skyline with a frown etched deep into his brow. Senator Chuchi sat stiffly on the edge of the couch, her shoulder bandaged from shrapnel. PadmĂŠ was leaned over the table, scanning a datapad and speaking in hushed tones to Mon Mothma. You stood near the bookcase, arms folded, trying to will the fire in your chest into something productive.
It wasnât working.
âIâm tired of acting like weâre not under siege,â you muttered aloud.
PadmĂŠ looked up, lips pressed thin. âWe are. We just havenât named the enemy yet.â
Chuchi nodded slowly. âThey know what theyâre doing. Each strike more coordinated. Less about killingâmore about threatening. Silencing.â
Bail finally turned, face unreadable. âThey want us reactive. Fractured. Suspicious of each other.â
âWe should be,â you said, pacing a slow line. âNo oneâs admitting whatâs happening. The Senate hushes it up. Security leaks are too convenient. And somehow every target is someone with a voice too loud for the Chancellorâs comfort.â
That earned a moment of silence.
Mon Mothma spoke softly. âYou think heâs involved.â
âI think someone close to him is.â
âWe canât keep pretending these are isolated,â you said finally.
âThey know that,â PadmĂŠ murmured. âThe question is: why isnât anyone doing more?â
Bail, now standing at the head of his polished desk, didnât answer immediately. His jaw was set. His gaze flicked over the datachart projected in front of himâattack markers, profiles, probable motives.
âTheyâre testing the Republic,â he said. âOr whatâs left of it.â
âTheyâre testing us,â Mothma whispered, voice hoarse. âAnd if we keep responding with silence and procedural delays, theyâll push until thereâs no one left to oppose them.â
The words sat heavy.
Outside the door, the crimson shadow of the Coruscant Guard stood watchâFox and Thorn included, though you hadnât glanced their way since entering.
But you could feel them. You always did now.
You turned slightly, voice low. âHave any of you gotten direct messages?â
Chuchi looked up sharply. âThreats?â
You nodded.
There was a beat of silence. Then Mothma sighed. âOne. Disguised in a customs manifest. It knew⌠too much.â
PadmĂŠ nodded. âMine was through a Senate droid. Disguised as a corrupted firmware packet.â
You didnât speak. Yours had come days agoâburied in a late-night intelligence brief with no sender. All it said was:
You are not untouchable.
You hadnât slept since.
âWe need to pressure the Supreme Chancellor,â Bail said.
That earned a sour look from you. âHeâll deflect. Say itâs a security issue, not a political one.â
âThen we make it political,â Mothma said, finally sounding like herself again. âWe use our voice. While we still have one.â
The room shifted then. A renewed sense of unityâbrittle, but burning.
But in the quiet after, your gaze slippedâjust for a momentâtoward the guards stationed outside the door.
Fox stood perfectly still, helmet tilted in your direction. Thorn just beside him, arms folded. Neither moved. Neither spoke.
But their presence spoke volumes.
This was war.
And somewhere between the smoke and the silence, something else was taking rootâdangerous, fragile, and very hard to ignore.
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The room was dark, save for the steady pulse of holo-screens. Red and blue glows blinked over datafeeds, security footage, encrypted reportsâlayered chaos organized with military precision.
Fox stood at the center console, arms braced against its edge. Thorn leaned nearby, still in partial armor, visor down. Both men had discarded formalities, if only for this moment.
âThis list isnât shrinking,â Thorn muttered, scrolling through the updated intel. âIf anything, itâs tightening.â
Fox tapped in a command, bringing up the names of every senator involved in the recent threats. Mothma. Organa. Chuchi. Amidala. And her.
He paused on her name.
No title. No pretense.
Just:
[FIRST NAME] [LAST NAME]
Planet of Origin: Classified. Access requires Level Six or higher.
Military Status: Former Commander, Planetary Forces, 12th Resistance Front
Notable Actions: Siege of Klydos Ridge, Amnesty Trial #3114-A
Designations: War Criminal (Cleared). Commendation of Valor.
Thorn let out a slow breath. âWell. That explains a few things.â
Fox didnât speak. His eyes scanned every lineâcalm, deliberate.
âShe was tried?â Thorn asked.
âYeah. And cleared. But thisâŚâ Fox magnified a classified document stamped with a Republic seal. âShe made decisions that turned the tide of a planetary civil war. But it cost lives. Enemy and ally.â
âSounds like a soldier,â Thorn said.
âSounds like someone who was never supposed to be a senator.â
They both stared at the glowing file, silent for a long beat.
âWhy hide it?â Thorn asked. âYouâd think someone with that record would lean on it.â
Fox finally replied, quiet: âBecause war heroes make people nervous. War criminals scare them. And she was both.â
Thorn folded his arms. âShe doesnât look like someone whoâs seen hell.â
âNo,â Fox agreed. âBut she acts like it.â
A beat passed.
Thorn tilted his head slightly. âYou feel it too?â
Fox didnât answer immediately.
âYouâre not the only one watching her, Thorn.â
The words werenât sharp. They werenât angry. Just honest.
And for a moment, silence stretched between themânot as soldiers, not as commanders, but as men standing at the edge of something they couldnât name.
Before either could say more, a message flashed in red across the console:
MOTHMA ESCORT CLEARED. STANDBY FOR NEXT PROTECTIVE ASSIGNMENT: SENATOR [LAST NAME]
Fox closed the file with one last look.
Thorn gave a tight nod.
But as the lights of the war room dimmed behind them, neither could quite forget the file still burning in the back of their mindsâor the woman behind it.
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It was hard to feel normal with three clones, a Jedi Padawan, and a Skywalker surrounding your lunch table like you were preparing to launch a military operation instead of ordering garden risotto.
The restaurant had cleared out most of its upper terrace for âSenatorial Security Reasons.â A ridiculous way to say: people were trying to kill you. Again.
Still, PadmĂŠ had insisted. And somehowâsomehowâyouâd ended up saying yes.
The sun was soft and golden through the vine-laced awning above, dappling the white tablecloths with moving light. The air smelled like roasted herbs and fresh rain, but not even that could soften the tension in your shoulders.
âYou donât have to look like youâre about to give a press briefing,â PadmĂŠ teased gently, reaching for her wine.
You let out a slow breath, forcing a smile. âItâs hard to relax when Iâm being watched like a spice smuggler at customs.â
Across from you, Anakin Skywalker didnât even flinch. He was leaned casually against the terrace railing, arms folded, lightsaber clipped at the ready. Rex stood a few paces behind, helmet on but gaze sharply fixed beyond the decorative trellises. Ahsoka was beside him, hands on her hips, trying very hard to pretend she wasnât completely bored.
Then there were your shadowsâFox and Thorn.
They stood just far enough to give the illusion of privacy. Both in full armor. Both still as statues.
You saw them watching everyone. Especially Skywalker.
âIâm just saying,â PadmĂŠ said, twirling her fork. âIf I were an assassin, this place would be the worst possible place to strike. Too many guards. Too many eyes.â
âDonât tempt fate,â you muttered.
Ahsoka leaned forward, chin in hand, curious now. âSenator Amidala says you donât really need all this protection. That true?â
You blinked once. PadmĂŠ was smirking into her glass. Of course she was.
âWell,â you said smoothly, lifting your napkin to your lap, âsome senators are more difficult to target than others.â
Ahsoka squinted. âThatâs not an answer.â
âThatâs politics,â you replied with a practiced grin.
From behind, Fox shifted slightly. Thornâs head turned just barely. Theyâd heard every word.
PadmĂŠ laughed quietly. âSheâs been dodging questions since she was seventeen. Donât take it personally.â
Ahsoka grinned, shaking her head. âOkay, fine. But seriouslyâwhat did you do before the Senate?â
You took a slow sip of your wine. âI made a mess of things. Then I cleaned them up. Very effectively.â
âVague,â Ahsoka said.
âDeliberately.â
The conversation drifted to safer thingsâfashion, terrible policy drafts, the tragedy of synthetic caf. You allowed yourself to laugh once. Maybe twice. It was good to pretend, even just for a meal.
But as the plates were cleared and sunlight dipped a little lower, you glanced once toward the shadows.
Thorn stood with his arms crossed, ever the silent shield. Fox, next to him, gave you one sharp nod when your eyes metâno smile, no softness, just silent reassurance.
You werenât sure what made your heart thump harder: the weight of your past threatening to surface⌠or the way neither of them looked away.
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The wine had just been poured againâPadmĂŠ was laughing about a hideous gown sheâd been forced to wear for a peace summit on Rylothâwhen the world cracked in half.
The sound came first: not a blaster, not the familiar pulse of warâbut the high-pitched whistle of precision. You knew that sound. Youâd heard it before. In a past life.
Sniper.
Glass shattered near PadmĂŠâs shoulder, spraying the table in glittering fragments. A scream rose somewhere below, muffled by the thick walls of the restaurant. And thenâ
âGET DOWN!â
Fox moved like lightning. One arm shoved you sideways, sending you down behind the table just as another shot scorched overhead. Thorn dove the opposite direction, deflecting debris with his arm guard, already scanning rooftops.
Anakinâs saber ignited mid-air.
The green blade of Ahsokaâs followed a heartbeat later.
âSniper on the north building!â Rex barked, blaster up and already coordinating through his helmet comms. âMultiple shootersâcoverâs compromised!â
Another blast tore through the awning, scorching PadmĂŠâs chair. You yanked her down with you, shielding her head with your arms.
âTwo squads, at least,â Thorn said over comms. âOrganized. Not a distractionâthis is the hit.â
Skywalker growled something dark and bolted forward, vaulting over the terrace railing with a flash of blue saber and fury.
âAhsoka!â he shouted back. âGet them out of hereânow!â
She was already moving. âSenators, with me!â
You didnât hesitateâyour combat instincts burned hot and automatic. You grabbed PadmĂŠâs hand and ran, ducking low behind Ahsoka as she slashed through the decorative back entrance with her saber. The door hissed openâFox and Thorn moved in tandem, covering your escape with rapid fire precision.
âGo!â Fox shouted. âWeâll hold the line!â
You and PadmĂŠ bolted through the kitchen, past startled staff and broken plates. Behind you, the sounds of a full-scale assault filled the airâblaster fire, shouted orders, another explosion shaking the foundations.
Ahsoka skidded into the alley, saber still lit. âRex, redirect the speeder evacâpull it two blocks west! Weâre going underground!â
PadmĂŠ looked pale. You werenât sure if it was the near-miss or the fact that you were dragging her like a soldier, not a senator.
âThis way,â you said, yanking open a service hatch. âDown the delivery chute. Go.â
She blinked. âYouâve done this before.â
âLater.â
Minutes stretched like hours as Ahsoka led you and PadmĂŠ through Coruscantâs underlevels. The girl was quick, preciseâbut young. She kept glancing back at you, questions on her face even in the middle of a mission.
PadmĂŠ finally caught her breath. âAre we clear?â
âAlmost,â Ahsoka said. âRex is circling a transport in now. Weâll get you back to the Senate.â
You exhaled slowly, the adrenaline catching up to your bones.
Ahsoka looked at you directly this time. âYou werenât afraid.â
You shook your head. âIâve been afraid before. This wasnât it.â
And though she didnât press, something in her eyes said she understood more than she let on.
Because that wasnât fear. That was reflex. Memory. War rising again in your blood, no matter how carefully youâd buried it.
And you werenât sure if that scared you more⌠or comforted you.
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The plush carpet muffled your steps as you entered the secured room, escorted by the Chancellorâs guards but notably free of the Chancellor himself. Thank the stars. The tension in your jaw was just now beginning to ease.
PadmĂŠ sat beside you, brushing glass dust from the hem of her gown. She wasnât shaking anymore, though her eyes betrayed the flickers of adrenaline still fading. Ahsoka stood at the window, her arms crossed, gaze sharp as she scanned the skyline.
âI shouldâve worn flats,â PadmĂŠ muttered, leaning toward you. âLast time I try to be fashionable during an assassination attempt.â
You gave a small, dry laugh. âNext time, we coordinate. Combat boots under formalwear. Very senatorial.â
Ahsoka turned slightly, studying you.
PadmĂŠ smiled faintly, but her next words were laced with meaning. âWell, you would know. Iâve never seen someone pull a senator out of a sniperâs line of fire with that kind of precision. It was⌠practiced.â
You didnât miss the weight in her tone.
âRemind me never to tell you anything personal again,â you quipped, keeping your smile light. âYouâre terrible with secrets.â
PadmĂŠ raised a brow, amused. âI am a politician.â
âYouâre a gossip,â you shot back playfully.
Ahsoka tilted her head, clearly intrigued. âWait⌠practiced?â
Before PadmĂŠ could answerâor you could pivotâthe doors slid open.
Thorn entered first, helmet under one arm. His eyes immediately scanned the room. Fox followed a step behind, helmet still on, shoulders squared, every inch of him sharp and unreadable. But you felt his eyes on you. The pause in his step. The tension in his jaw.
Neither man spoke right away. But they didnât need to. Their presence filled the room with the kind of silent protection that wasnât easily taught. Not one senator in the room doubted theyâd cleared the entire floor twice over before allowing the doors to open.
Foxâs voice cut through after a beat. âAre you both unharmed?â
PadmĂŠ nodded. âWeâre fine. Thanks to all of you.â
Thornâs eyes shifted to youâjust a second longer than protocol called for. âYouâre calm.â
You shrugged. âPanicking rarely improves aim.â
Ahsoka didnât let it go. âSo⌠you have training?â
You gave her your best senatorial smile. âWouldnât every politician be safer if they did?â
PadmĂŠ gave you a look. âYouâre dodging.â
âIâm deflecting. Thereâs a difference.â
Before Ahsoka could press, the door slid open again, and Captain Rex stepped in.
His brow was furrowed beneath his helmet, his tone clipped and straight to the point. âGeneral Skywalker captured one of the assassins. Alive.â
That got everyoneâs attention.
Fox stepped forward. âWhere is he now?â
âEn route to a secure interrogation cell. Skywalkerâs escorting him personally. He wants the senators updated.â
Your fingers curled slightly into the fabric of your robe. For all your practiced calm, something burned beneath your ribs.
Someone had targeted you. Again.
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You barely sat.
Your body ached to moveâto fightâbut instead you paced the perimeter of the small, sterile waiting room the Guard had shoved you into while Skywalker handled the interrogation.
Two chairs. A water dispenser. No windows.
And a commander blocking the only door like a wall of red and steel.
Fox.
Youâd seen Thorn step out to âcoordinate with Rex,â but Fox hadnât budged since Rex walked in with the update. Motionless. Head tilted just enough to follow your pacing.
It had been seven minutes.
You stopped finally, resting your palms flat on a small metal desk.
His voice, when it came, was rougher than usual.
âYou need to sit down.â
You didnât look at him. âNo.â
âAnd drink water.â
âNo.â
A longer pause.
âYou may be a former soldier,â he said quietly, âbut youâre still human.â
That actually made you spin aroundâlips curling into a sharp smile.
âFunny. You treat me more like china than human, most of the time.â
Fox didnât move, but you could feel the shift.
âYouâre not breakable,â he said flatly. âThat isnât the point.â
âWhat is?â
He was quiet.
You stared at him, taking a slow step closer. You knew it was reckless before your feet moved. But you did it anyway.
âTell me, Commander.â
Fox didnât answer immediately.
But thenâhis head turned just slightly toward the ceiling. As if he was measuring something he didnât want to name.
You were about to fold your arms, press harderâwhen he spoke.
Voice low. Tight.
âIf anyoneâs going to break you, it should be your choice.â
For half a second, your heart stopped.
Your eyes snapped to his visorânot in disbelief, but in something far more dangerous.
He held your stare.
Then turned his body back toward the door in a sharp movementâlike heâd reset an entire system with one motion.
âSit down, Senator,â he said, brushing the moment away like it was protocol.
You did.
But not because he told you to.
Because your knees suddenly felt unsteady.
And outside, Thornâs shadow was pacing too.
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Thorn wasnât brooding.
He told himself that twice. Then once more for good measure.
He wasnât broodingâhe was thinking.
Processing.
Decompressing, even.
Helmet off. Armor half-stripped. He leaned against the long bench in the quietest corner of the barracks, pretending not to hear Stone snoring two bunks down. Pretending not to care that Houndâs mastiff, Grizzer, had somehow crawled under his bunk and now slept like it was his.
He ran a hand through his hair.
It shouldâve been a normal dayâhell, even a standard post-attack lockdown. Escort the senators. Maintain security. Nothing complicated.
But she had looked at him.
Really looked. Past the phrasing, past the title. Past the helmet.
And worseâheâd let her.
That smile she gave when Fox told her to sit, that off-hand comment about being treated like chinaâit stuck in his mind like a saber mark. Not because of what she said, but because of what she didnât. The way she tested the air in every conversation. Pressed and pressed until something cracked.
And if she pressed him againâhe wasnât sure heâd hold as well as Fox did.
Thorn sighed sharply and stood, heading for the hall.
He needed air.
Thorn didnât expect her to be out.
It was late. Sheâd had a hell of a day. She was a senator.
But there she was, near the far fence where the decorative lights bled softly across the foliage. Arms crossed. Expression unreadable. Alone.
She turned her head a little when she heard his approach, then fullyâhalf a smile forming.
âI wondered whoâd come to check on me first.â
Thorn raised an eyebrow. âYou expected someone?â
She shrugged, but it was coy. âLetâs not pretend either of you would let me go unmonitored tonight.â
He smirked, just faintly, and stepped closer. âYouâre not wrong.â
They stood there, still, in the humid night air. The stars were dim from all the light pollutionâbut Thorn didnât look up.
He looked at her.
The silence stretched again.
âYou know,â she said after a beat, âfor someone whoâs so damn good at his job⌠youâre terrible at hiding how much you care.â
He didnât deny it. Not this time.
Thornâs voice was low when he replied. âAnd youâre good at provoking reactions.â
âYou didnât give me one.â
He met her gaze. âDidnât I?â
That landed harder than she expected. Her smile faltered.
And when she didnât answer, Thorn gently touched her elbowâbrief, almost professional.
But not quite.
âYouâre not just another asset,â he said quietly. âI just donât know what that means yet.â
Then he stepped away.
And she let him.
But she didnât stop thinking about it all night.
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The day was mostly quietâtoo quiet. Meetings had ended early, and most senators had retreated to their quarters or offworld duties. She had slipped away from the dull chatter, climbing the stairs to the lesser-known observation deckâher sanctuary when the pressure of politics felt too tight around her throat.
But she wasnât alone for long.
Thorn stepped through the archway, helmet under his arm, posture rigid as ever.
âI figured Iâd find you up here,â he said.
She arched a brow. âAm I that predictable?â
âNo,â he said. âYouâre just hard to keep track of when you want to be. But you only disappear when somethingâs bothering you.â
She tilted her head slightly, giving him a quiet once-over. âAnd what makes you think somethingâs bothering me?â
Thorn didnât answer right away. Instead, he stepped to the edge, eyes scanning the skyline. When he finally spoke, his voice was low. Measured. âYou wear your control like armor, Senator. But itâs heavy. I can see it.â
She turned away from the view to face him fully. âYou really shouldnât say things like that.â
âWhy?â
âBecause youâre not supposed to care.â
His jaw tensed, the shift subtle, but not lost on her.
âAnd yetâŚâ she continued, stepping closer, ââŚhere you are. Always near. Always watching. Iâm not blind, Thorn. You donât flinch when thereâs danger. But you flinch when I look at you too long.â
He didnât respond. Not at first.
So she pushed again.
âYouâre a good soldier. Loyal. By the book.â Her voice dropped. âSo tell meâhow much longer are you going to pretend I donât affect you?â
Thornâs composure cracked.
It was a split second.
But in that second, he movedâone hand cupping the side of her face, the other bracing her waist as he kissed her. Not roughly. Not rushed. But with the kind of restraint that felt like it was burning both of them alive from the inside out.
He pulled back just enough to breatheâbut not enough to let go.
And thenâ
âCommander.â
The voice cut through the silence like a knife.
Thorn froze.
She turned her head slowly, her heart hammering, to find Fox standing at the top of the stairsâhelmet on, voice emotionless.
Almost.
âYouâre needed back at the barracks. Now.â
âSirââ
âImmediately.â
Thorn stepped away, face hardening into a mask. He didnât look at her again. He simply nodded once to Fox and walked away, every step heavy with restrained emotion.
Fox waited until Thorn disappeared from sight before turning back to her.
âSenator,â he said, voice quieter now, almost too quiet. âThat was⌠out of line.â
She raised a brow, pulse still thrumming from the kiss. âWhich part?â
Fox didnât answer.
But his silence said enough.
Jealousy had sharp edges. And for the first time, he wasnât hiding his anymore.
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Commander Fox x Reader X Commander Thorn
Thorn didnât storm. That wasnât his style. He walked with purpose, armor humming low with motion, cape swaying behind him like a whisper of discipline.
But Hound noticed.
He was lounging against a supply crate near the barracks entrance, tossing a ration bar to Grizzer, who promptly ignored it in favor of chewing on a ruined training boot.
âEvening, Commander,â Hound said, biting back a grin. âYou walk like someone just voted to cut rations for clones with sense.â
Thorn didnât answer. He brushed past, stopped, and then turned around so sharply Hound blinked.
âWhy the hell does she smile like that?â Thorn muttered.
Hound blinked again. ââŚPardon?â
âSenator,â Thorn said curtly. âThe senator. She smiles like she doesnât care that weâre built for war. Like weâre not walking weapons. Like sheâs not afraid of what we are.â
Grizzer let out a soft woof.
Hound tilted his head. âSo⌠whatâs the problem?â
âThe problem,â Thorn said, pacing now, his helmet under one arm, âis that I find myself caring about her smile. Noticing it. Waiting for it. The nerve of herâwalking between two commanders like itâs nothing. Like weâre not trained to see everything as a threat. Like sheâs not a threat.â
âTo what? Your assignment?â Hound asked, amused. âOr your emotional stability?â
Thorn glared. Grizzer whined, wandered over, and bumped his head into Thornâs shin. He reached down and idly scratched behind the mastiffâs ears.
âShe got under your skin,â Hound said, chewing on the stem of a stim-pop. âHappens to the best of us. Sheâs clever. Looks good in those robes. Has a backbone of beskar. Whatâs not to notice?â
âI donât want to notice.â
âAh, but you do.â
Thorn didnât reply.
He sat down heavily on the bench beside Hound, setting his helmet down beside him.
âI shouldnât even be thinking about this. About her.â
âShe flirt with you?â
Thorn hesitated. âNot⌠obviously.â
âBut enough to make Fox irritated.â
Thorn raised a brow. âYou noticed that too.â
âPlease. Foxâs expression didnât change, but the man started walking closer to her like she was carrying his damn tracking chip.â Hound chuckled. âBet he doesnât even realize heâs doing it.â
They sat in silence for a minute.
Grizzer dropped the training boot in front of Thorn and wagged his tail.
Thorn stared at the mangled leather. âThatâs about how my brain feels.â
Hound laughed. âCommander, you need sleep.â
âI need a reassignment.â
âYou need to admit sheâs under your skin and figure out how not to let it compromise your professionalism.â
Thorn exhaled slowly.
âCanât let it show.â
âGood,â Hound nodded. âNow come inside before Grizzer starts thinking youâve become a chew toy too.â
Thorn stood, gave the mastiff a final scratch behind the ears, and retrieved his helmet.
He didnât say another wordâbut the weight in his steps had shifted. Just a little.
Not lighter. Not heavier.
Just more aware.
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The city was unusually quiet that evening. The hum of speeders far below faded beneath the hush of twilight. The Coruscant skyline glowed, glass and durasteel kissed by soft reds and purples.
Fox didnât linger in beautiful places.
He was there on duty, posted near the upper balcony where the senator had stepped out âjust for a breath.â He hadnât planned to engage, only observe, protect, return.
But she hadnât gone back inside.
She leaned against the railing, alone, hair pinned up loosely, a datapad forgotten beside her, as if the very idea of responsibility repulsed her in that moment.
He waited a respectful distance. Still. Silent. Like always.
Then she spoke.
âYou ever wonder if all thisââshe gestured to the skylineââis actually worth protecting?â
He said nothing. He was trained for silence. Expected to maintain it.
But her voice was quieter this time. âSorry. I know thatâs dark. I justâfeel like Iâm holding up a wall no one else wants to fix.â
Fox found himself responding before he thought better of it. âThatâs the job.â
She turned slightly, surprised.
He added, âHolding up the wall.â
The senator gave him a faint, exhausted smile. âDo you ever feel like itâs crumbling under your feet anyway?â
He didnât answer. Not with words.
He took a step closer instead.
A small thing. Measured. Not enough to draw attention.
But enough for her to notice.
Her gaze lowered to the space now between them. âCommander,â she said gently, teasingly, âif I didnât know any better, Iâd think you were getting comfortable.â
âIâm not,â he said flatly.
She tilted her head. âShame. Itâs a lovely view.â
He said nothing, but his eyes didnât move from her.
And thenâ
She turned away. Not dramatically. Just slowly, thoughtfully, brushing a finger along the railâs edge.
âItâs funny,â she said, voice soft again. âI think I trust you more than I trust half the Senate.â
âYou shouldnât,â he replied, too quickly.
She looked over her shoulder. âWhy not?â
He didnât answer.
Because the truth wasâ
He didnât know.
He looked away first.
You stared.
Fox was composed, always. The kind of man who spoke with fewer words than most used in a breath. Youâd watched him through Senate hearings, committee debriefings, and those long silences standing at your side. He was built for controlâstone-set and unshakable.
Which is why this moment felt like seeing a fault line in a mountain.
You stepped toward him.
Just slightly.
âI asked why not,â you repeated, your voice lower now. Not coy. Not teasing. Just⌠honest.
Foxâs helmet was clipped to his belt, his posture precise. But his jaw had locked. His brow was tightânot angry, not annoyed.
Guarded.
âYou donât know me,â he finally said, eyes fixed on the horizon like it might offer him cover.
âI know enough,â you replied, softer.
He didnât move.
You tried again.
âYou think I trust people easily?â A dry laugh left you. âI sit beside men who sell planets and call it compromise. Iâve had allies vote against my own bills while smiling at me from across the chamber. But youâwhen you walk into a room, everything sharpens.â
That got his attention. A flicker of his gaze, brief but direct.
You stepped closer.
âYou donât talk unless itâs important. You watch everything. And no one gets close, not really. But I see the way your men listen when you speak. I see how you stand between danger and everyone else without asking for anything in return.â
His expression didnât shift. Not much.
But his hands curled faintly at his sides.
âI trust you, Commander,â you said. âAnd I donât think thatâs a mistake.â
The wind picked up slightly, rustling the edge of your robe.
Fox was quiet for a long time. And thenâ
âDonât.â
One word. Clipped. Too sharp to be cold.
You blinked. âDonât⌠what?â
He turned to face you fully now, and there was something thereâin his eyes, usually so still. Not anger. Not fear.
A warning.
âDonât mistake professionalism for something it isnât.â
You looked up at him for a moment, unmoving. âIâm not.â
His jaw flexed. âThen donât ask questions you donât want the answers to.â
That hit a nerve. You stood straighter, chest tight.
âYou donât get to blame me for not hearing the things youâre too chicken to say,â you said quietly, your voice clipped but steady.
His breath caughtânot visibly, not audibly. But you saw it. In the eyes. In the way his shoulders tightened, like something had landed.
But he didnât respond.
You watched him another moment, then stepped back, retreating into the cool hallway of the Senate building without another word.
He stayed there.
In the quiet.
And stared after you like the words had hit him somewhere unarmored.
The marble under your boots echoed with each step, but you walked without a sound.
The exchange with Fox still thrummed in your chest. The way heâd looked at you. The way he hadnât.
The way his silence had said too much.
You pressed a hand to your temple, trying to will the flush in your skin to cool. You hadnât meant to push that farâbut stars, you had been waiting for something. Anything. A sign that the wall wasnât so impenetrable.
You didnât expect the next voice you heard.
âMy dear senator,â came the smooth, silk-wrapped timbre of Chancellor Palpatine.
You froze.
Not because of fear. But because his voice always had that effect.
You turned and offered the practiced smile you reserved for⌠certain company.
âChancellor,â you said, clasping your hands politely in front of you. âI didnât see you.â
He stepped into the corridor from the far end, draped in red and black, expression benevolent, but sharp beneath the surface.
âI was passing through after a long meeting with the Banking Clan representatives. Tense discussions, Iâm afraid. I trust youâre well?â
âWell enough,â you replied smoothly. âJust getting some air.â
âAh,â he said, folding his hands behind his back as he walked beside you. âWe all need moments of reflection. Though I imagine yours are far and few between these days. The Senate rarely allows much rest.â
You gave a short laugh. âNo. It certainly doesnât.â
He glanced at you, unreadable.
âI hear the Guardâs been paying close attention to you lately. Commander Fox himself, no less. Itâs good to see such⌠attentiveness. You must feel very safe.â
Your spine straightened slightly. âTheyâre dedicated men. Iâm grateful for their protection.â
âIâm sure you are,â he said, the warmth in his tone not quite reaching his eyes. âStill⌠I hope you remember where your true allies lie.â
You offered him the same tight smile. âOf course, Chancellor.â
He regarded you for a moment longer. âYouâve always been a passionate voice, Senator. Young. Decisive. I do hope youâll continue to support the efforts of the Republic, especially as we move into⌠more delicate phases of wartime policy.â
You didnât flinch. âI serve the people of my system. And I believe in the Republic.â
âBut belief,â he said, gently, âis only part of the duty. Sometimes we must make difficult choices. Unpopular ones.â
You met his gaze and gave nothing back.
âThen I hope the right people are making them,â you replied.
His smile thinned. âAs do I.â
You inclined your head. âIf youâll excuse me, Chancellor, I do have a report to finish.â
He stepped aside, allowing you to pass.
âOf course. Rest well, Senator. Youâll need your strength.â
You didnât look back.
You didnât need to.
The shadow of his presence stretched long after his footsteps faded.
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Fox sat in the dark.
Helmet on the table. Armor half-unclasped. Fingers pressed to the bridge of his nose.
He hadnât even made it to his bunk.
The locker room was silent, most of the Guard long since rotated out or posted elsewhere. The overheads were dimmed. Only the soft mechanical hum of the lockers and the occasional flicker of red light from an indicator broke the stillness.
But his mind wasnât still.
Heâd heard people raise their voices at him before. Angry senators, frustrated generals, clones pushed to the brink. That was easy. Anger rolled off him like rain off plastoid.
This was different.
She hadnât said it to wound him.
Sheâd said it like she meant it.
Like she saw him.
And for the first time in a long time, he didnât know what to do with that.
His hands flexed in his lap, slow and deliberate. He remembered how she looked tonightâstanding under the red-gold skyline, eyes bright but tired, speaking softly like they were the only two people left in the galaxy.
It was wrong. Letting it get to him.
She was a senator. He was a soldier.
It wasnât supposed to matter what her voice did to his chest.
What the scent of her did to his focus.
He wasnât Thorn. He didnât lean in. He didnât get rattled by conversation, didnât let his mouth run ahead of his orders.
But⌠sheâd gotten under his skin. Somehow.
Fox exhaled slowly and reached for his gloves.
Then paused.
His thumb hovered over the comlink tucked beside his helmet.
He stared at it for a moment. Not to call her. He wouldnât.
But just knowing she could.
That if she needed him, his name would be the first thing spoken through the channel.
He set his jaw, stood up, and locked his armor back into place.
Duty first.
Always.
But his mind stayed behind, somewhere on a balcony, in the dusk light⌠with her.
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The door slid open with its usual soft chime. You stepped inside, heels clicking gently against polished stone, and leaned heavily against the wall the moment it shut behind you.
Exhausted didnât quite cover it.
The encounter with the Chancellor still lingered like static. And Foxâ
Stars above, Fox.
You kicked off your shoes, dropped your bag, and made your way into the kitchen. You poured yourself something strong and cold, letting the silence of your private apartment sink in.
And thenâ
The soft buzz of your datapad.
You blinked.
A message.
Not from the Guard.
Not from your aides.
ButâŚ
Commander Thorn: Heard there was a rough hearing. You alive in there, or should I break down the door?
You smiled.
And for a moment, the tension eased.
You didnât reply to Thorn right away.
You stared at the message, lips curving despite the weight still pressing behind your ribs. A chuckle slipped outâquiet, private. The kind meant only for a screen, not a roomful of senators.
Your fingers hovered over the keys for a second before typing:
You: Alive. Barely. Tempted to fake my death and move to Naboo. You free to help bury the body?
The typing indicator blinked back almost immediately.
Thorn: Only if I get first choice on the alias. I vote âDuchess Trouble.â
You: Thatâs terrible. But Iâm keeping it.
Thorn: Thought you might. Get some rest. You earned it today.
You stared at that last line.
You earned it today.
You werenât sure why those words hit harder than anything in the hearing. Maybe it was because it came from someone who saw things most senators never would. Maybe because it was real.
You typed back:
You: You too, Commander.
And then you set the datapad down, changed out of your formal wear, and let exhaustion carry you to bed.
You werenât asleep long.
The shrill tone of your emergency comms broke through your dreams like a blaster shot.
You jerked upright, blinking against the haze of sleep, reaching for the device without hesitation.
âH-hello?â your voice cracked, still hoarse from sleep.
A voiceâclipped, familiar, urgentâresponded.
Fox.
âSenator. Thereâs been another incident. Weâre en route.â
You were already moving. âWhere?â
âSenator Mothmaâs estate. Explosive detonation near her security gate. No confirmed injuries, but itâs close enough to send a message.â
You froze for only a heartbeat.
âIâll be ready in five.â
Fox didnât waste time on reassurance. âWeâll be outside your building. Donât go anywhere alone.â
The line cut.
You stood in the dark for a second, pulse racing, mind already shifting into survival mode.
Whatever peace youâd clawed out of tonight had just shattered.
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It was a controlled knockâno panic, no urgencyâbut hard enough to rattle the stillness of the apartment. You flinched, fumbling with your robe as you darted from your bedroom barefoot, still half-dressed.
âStars, already?â you muttered, cinching the robe at your waist.
The buzzer chimed again.
You hit the panel to open the door.
And there they were.
Fox. Thorn. Towering in crimson armor, backlit by the corridor lights and the glint of Coruscantâs neon skyline. Visors staring forward. Blasters holsteredâbut you could feel the tension radiating off them like heat from durasteel.
Neither said anything at first.
Then, in a voice low and composed, Fox spoke:
âSenator. We arrived earlier than anticipated.â
âYeah, no kidding,â you breathed, pushing a damp strand of hair behind your ear. Your robe was thinâtoo thin, you realized, as the air from the hallway crept over your skin. You crossed your arms instinctively, but it didnât hide much.
Foxâs helmet tilted slightlyâeyes dragging across your form in a quiet, tactical sweep. Not leering. Just⌠a longer pause than necessary.
Next to him, Thorn cleared his throat.
You raised an eyebrow at both of them. âEnjoying the view, Commanders?â
They didnât flinch. Of course they didnât. Both statues of composure, helmets hiding any flicker of reaction.
Fox spoke again, brisk. âWeâll step inside and secure the apartment. You have five minutes.â
âYes, sir,â you muttered with mock-formality, brushing past them with bare feet against the floor. As you turned, you caught itâFoxâs head slightly turning to follow your movement. A fraction too long.
And thank the stars for helmets, because if you saw his face, youâd never let him live it down.
They moved through your apartment in practiced rhythm, clearing rooms, scanning corners, locking down windows and possible points of breach. Thorn stayed closer to the door, back to the wall, but his shoulders were taut beneath the red of his armor.
You emerged a few minutes later, dressed properly nowâhair pulled back, expression sharpened by the adrenaline still running its course.
Fox glanced your way first. His visor tilted again, more subtle this time.
âAll clear,â he said, voice crisp. âYouâre to be escorted to the Guardâs secure transport. Weâll be moving now.â
You met his visor with a crooked smile. âYou didnât even compliment my robe.â
Thorn, behind him, let out a breath. It mightâve been a laugh. Or a sigh of please, not now.
Fox said nothing.
But his shoulders stiffened just slightly.
And as you stepped between them, one on each side, the heat of their presence pressed in like a second skin.
Danger waited out there.
But for now, this tension?
This was its own kind of war.
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The hum of the engine filled the silence. City lights flared and blurred past the transparisteel windows as the transport cut through the lower atmosphere. Inside, the dim blue glow from the dash consoles painted all three of you in a cold, unflinching light.
Fox sat across from you, arms folded, helmet still on. Thorn was beside him, angled slightly your wayâwatching the shadows outside like they might reach in and pull the vehicle apart.
No one spoke at first.
It was you who finally broke the silence.
âThis isnât random, is it?â
Foxâs head turned. Slowly. âNo.â
Thorn added, âThree incidents in four days. All different targets, different methods. But same message.â
You nodded, arms tucked around yourself. âThe threatâs not just violenceâitâs disruption. Fear. Shake up the ones trying to hold the peace together.â
Fox leaned forward, resting his arms on his knees. âSenator Organaâs transport was sabotaged. PadmĂŠ Amidala intercepted a coded threat embedded in one of her Senate droid updates. And now Mothmaâs estate.â
âAll prominent senators,â Thorn said. âKnown for opposing authoritarian measures, trade blockades, or Separatist sympathies. Whoever this is⌠theyâre strategic.â
âAnd the Senateâs pretending itâs coincidence.â You exhaled a sharp breath. âCowards.â
Fox didnât respond, but you saw it in the turn of his helmetâlike heâd heard a truth too sharp to name.
Thornâs voice cut the quiet next. âYouâre on the list too, Senator. Whether theyâve moved or not, youâve been marked.â
You met his gaze, even through the visor. âThatâs not exactly comforting, Commander.â
âYou wanted honesty,â he replied quietly.
You blinked, caught off guardânot just by the words, but the tone. Low. Sincere. Laced with something warmer than protocol.
Fox shifted, barely. A turn of his body, a flicker of subtle tension.
âTheyâll keep escalating,â he said. âWe donât know how far.â
The transport took a turn, and city lights streamed in again, outlining their armor in a way that made them seem more like war statues than men.
And yet, when you looked at themâFox silent and braced for anything, Thorn watching you with just the slightest flicker of concern behind the visorâit wasnât fear that struck you.
It was the creeping awareness that maybe the danger outside wasnât the only storm building.
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Before the War, Before the Fall...
You were never supposed to be here.
Once, long before the clone army ever existed, you were a Jedi Knight of the Old Republic. A warrior of the High Order, trained in the arts of peace and battle alike. Your robes were stitched from tradition, your saber forged in a time when the galaxy still believed in balance. You fought in the Mandalorian conflicts, aided in the fallout of Sith uprisings, and stood beside legends long turned to dust.
And then, during a critical missionâclassified even by High Council standardsâyou were frozen in carbonite for protection, hidden away on an unmarked moon. Preserved in silence. Time passed. Empires fell. Republics reformed.
You were forgotten.
Until General Skywalker found you.
Woken from carbon stasis nearly a thousand years later, you emerged into a war-torn galaxy so alien, it barely recognized you as Jedi. The robes were the same. The Code had survived in pieces. But the people... *they* were different.
Especially the clones.
You had never seen soldiers bred for war. The first time you met the 501st, they moved as oneâdisciplined, deadly, proud. But each man had a spark of something unique. Echo's spark shone brightest to you.
ARC Trooper Echo, all calm focus and sharp wit. Loyal to a fault. Quietly brave. There was a warmth beneath his helmet that reminded you of someone you lost long ago.
And over time, in the stolen spaces between battles and strategy briefings, you found yourself seeking him out. And heâhesitantly, almost shylyâdid the same.
You shared jokes, glances, meditations by moonlight. Nothing official. Not even a kiss. Just the ache of something growing where no roots should've taken hold.
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**Now...**
The hangar echoed with the sound of carbon-freeze generators.
You stood near the chamber platform, arms folded, watching the 501st prepare for the Citadel mission. An infiltration like no other. High risk. No guarantee of return.
Your heart beat in time with the distant hiss of steam. You'd been in carbonite before. You wouldn't wish it on anyone.
"You really want to go through with this?" you asked as Echo approached, helmet tucked under his arm.
He smirked. "I've seen worse."
You raised an eyebrow. "Really? *Worse* than being flash-frozen and dropped into a fortress built to kill Jedi?"
He shrugged with a boyish tilt of his head. "When you put it like that..."
You stepped closer, lowering your voice. "I don't like this mission. Something feels... off."
Echo's smile faded just slightly. "I know. But we follow orders."
You stared at him a long moment, eyes locking with his.
"I've had my fair share of carbon-freeze," you said softly, a wry smile tugging at your lips. "Trust meâit's overrated. Don't make it a habit."
Echo chuckled, but there was something in his expressionâhesitation, maybe. Or hope. His fingers brushed yours briefly.
"If I don't make it backâ"
"You *will*," you cut in.
He held your gaze. "Still. If I don't... I'm glad it was you."
The words hung in the air like an unsent message. You swallowed the ache in your throat.
"I'll be waiting," you whispered.
Then the chamber hissed open, and Echo stepped inside. You watched as he was encased in freezing mistâfamiliar, haunting. And then he was still.
---
They returned.
Most of them.
But not him.
You heard the news with numb detachment. "Echo didn't make it." Skywalker didn't meet your eyes when he said it. Fives couldn't speak at all.
You were handed Echo's pauldron. Burnt. Cracked.
But the Force...
The Force *whispered* something else.
In meditation, beneath the endless hum of the ship, you reached for that flickerâthe warm, stubborn light of him. It was faint. Weak. But not extinguished.
You pressed your hand to your heart and said nothing.
Because you knew.
*Echo was still alive.*
And whatever the cost... you'd find him.
---
You couldn't let it go.
No matter how much time passed, or how many battles you fought alongside the 501st, there was something you couldn't shakeâa gnawing feeling deep in your soul. Echo was out there. You knew it. The Force whispered it to you every time you closed your eyes.
You felt him.
The report had come through the 501st's channelsâEcho was alive, but he was a prisoner. He had been taken to Skako Minor and reprogrammed, twisted into something... else. A broken version of the man he had once been. But you didn't care. You would bring him back. You would save him, no matter the cost.
Rex was right beside you, his unwavering loyalty to Echo just as strong as your own. The two of you, separated by a galaxy of uncertainty and destruction, had always understood each other in ways the others couldn't. Rex had never let go of his brother, and neither had you.
And now, you couldn't help but feel the heavy weight of the decision as you prepared for the mission. You weren't just doing this for Echo anymore. You were doing it for both of youâhim and you. For the love of a comrade, a soldier, a friend, and perhaps, deep down, someone more.
"I won't rest until we find him," you whispered to Rex before the mission began.
Rex gave you a stern nod, though his eyes were soft with the same grief you carried. "We're not stopping until we bring him home."
You shared a glance with himâa silent understanding of what this meant. Echo had always been there, in the trenches with them, in the hardest of battles. But now, it was different. The question of who he was had morphed into something unrecognizable. Would the man you both knew still be the same when you found him?
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The mission was critical, and time was running out.
You, along with Rex, Anakin Skywalker, and the Bad Batch, had infiltrated the outpost on Skako Minor. The Separatists had taken Echoâone of the finest ARC Troopersâand turned him into a prisoner, forced to serve their twisted agenda. You, however, weren't going to let that happen. Not if you could help it.
Echo was still alive. He had to be. You could feel it.
The journey to the outpost had been a long and difficult one, but now, standing on the precipice of their base, you knew what needed to be done. You had trained with Echo, fought beside him. He was family, and you weren't about to lose him to the war.
The place was cold, mechanical, and sterileâalmost too quiet for comfort. It felt like a graveyard. But the faintest sound of movement ahead cut through the silence.
You turned, locking eyes with Rex. His jaw was set, his gaze firm. Beside him, Anakin stood, ready for anything. And then, there was Echo.
But he wasn't the same.
There he wasâstrapped into an array of machines, wires trailing from his body, his face emotionless. The pain of seeing him like this nearly broke you in that moment, but you knew it wasn't over. He was still Echo.
"Echo," Rex called softly, stepping forward. "We've got you, buddy. We're getting you out of here."
For a moment, there was nothing but the hum of machines and the silence of the outpost. Then, a flicker of movement. Echo's head turned slowly, his eyes blank, as if the man you once knew was buried deep inside somewhere, and this was just the shell.
You stepped forward, your heart racing in your chest. "Echo? Can you hear me?" Your voice was calm, but it cracked with the emotion you could no longer contain. You were here. You had found him.
Slowly, Echo's lips curled into a small, dry smileâfamiliar, but tinged with something distant.
"You know, I was starting to get used to this place," Echo's voice was robotic, distant. "It's better than the barracks, but I think I could've done without the wires."
You laughed softly, despite the ache in your chest. "You always did have a way with words. Still, this is no place for you. We're taking you back, Echo. You belong with us."
Echo's gaze flickered toward you briefly, his eyes dull but still alive with some trace of recognition. "You... came for me," he muttered, as though trying to process the reality of it.
"You know we would," you said, your voice firm, yet gentle. "You're one of us, Echo. You don't leave your squad behind."
But Echo's face darkened, his expression turning pained. "I'm not the same anymore," he said quietly, almost regretfully. "They've done something to me. I don't know if I can go back to being who I was."
The words hit you hard. But you refused to back down. "That doesn't matter. You're still the same person, Echo. You've always been there for us. We are still here for you."
Echo shook his head slowly, his eyes never leaving the floor. "I don't know... I don't think I can go back to being that soldier. I've changed."
Rex stepped forward, his voice low but commanding. "You're more than what they've made you, Echo. You've always been more than that
For a moment, Echo seemed to consider this, his eyes moving between you and Rex. But then, he shook his head slowly.
"I don't know if I can go back to who I was," he said softly, his voice tinged with regret.
Rex's hand clenched into a fist. "You don't have to go back. We're here for you, Echo. We'll fight for you."
Anakin stepped forward, his voice calm but commanding. "We'll help you, Echo. We're not leaving anyone behind."
Echo's expression remained stoic, but you could see the flicker of uncertainty in his eyes.
"Maybe... maybe I'm not the man you want me to be," he whispered. "Maybe I'm not that soldier anymore."
The pain in Rex's eyes was palpable, but his voice was resolute. "You're not alone, Echo. You never were. And we're not leaving without you."
The escape was chaotic.
Once Echo was freed from the machine bindings, the alarms blared throughout the facility. There was no time to waste. You, Rex, Anakin, and the Bad Batch fought your way out, blasters blazing, all while Echo struggled to regain his bearings. His movements were stiff, his mind clouded from the reprogramming, but with every passing moment, you could see him coming back to himselfâalbeit slowly.
It was Anakin who led the charge through the outpost's corridors, his strategic mind piecing together their escape route even as enemy fire rained down on them. Rex covered you, his blaster raised and steady, while you kept your focus on Echo, guiding him through the madness.
"You're with us, Echo. We'll get you out of here," you said, trying to keep him calm. He didn't respond, but the faintest nod was all you needed.
When you reached the hangar, the Bad Batch took their positions, covering the exits and keeping the Separatists at bay. Echo was stumbling, but he kept moving forward, a faint glimmer of the soldier he once was starting to re-emerge. You didn't know if he would ever be the same again, but for now, he was with youâand that was all that mattered.
"Keep moving, Echo," you said as you pushed him toward the ship.
"I'm with you," he muttered, his voice rough but steady. "I'll never leave you behind."
Finally, after what felt like hours of intense combat, you made it to the ship. The engines roared to life, and the transport shot off into the atmosphere, away from the chaos of Skako Minor.
As you all settled into your seats, the adrenaline of the escape began to wear off, and the weight of what you'd just witnessed settled in. Echo was alive, but he was still so far from being the man you remembered. The wires, the reprogramming, the sufferingâit was all etched into him in ways you couldn't yet fully understand.
But you were determined to help him heal. You didn't care what it tookâ and you wouldn't leave him behind again.
- - -
The chaos of the mission on Skako Minor had finally settled, leaving an overwhelming sense of relief in its wake. The Marauder, the ship piloted by the Bad Batch, now cut through the stars as it headed towards the Republic fleet. It was a rough rideâno surprise there, considering the crewâbut it was a comforting one. There was a sense of familiarity with the Bad Batch's eccentricities, their usual banter filling the air around you. However, the most comforting part of all was Echo, sitting across from you.
It had been a long and arduous rescue, but Echo was finally freeâphysically, at least. The mental scars of his time with the Separatists would take longer to heal.
Echo was seated across from you, leaning back slightly in his seat, his expression distant. His posture was less rigid than usual, but you could see the storm behind his eyes. The escape had been harrowing, and he was still processing everything.
Wrecker, the ever-vibrant and boisterous member of the Bad Batch, was rummaging around in the back, most likely looking for snacks. "You know, if I didn't know any better, I'd say we were all a little too quiet today," he said with his signature grin, tossing a bag of chips to Tech, who caught it with precision.
Tech raised an eyebrow but accepted the snack. "We've just been through a rather intense operation, Wrecker. A little silence isn't a bad thing."
Meanwhile, Hunter leaned against the wall near the cockpit, his piercing eyes scanning the ship's systems, though his attention occasionally drifted toward you and Echo. You knew he respected Echo's capabilities, but you also suspected that he had noticed the bond growing between the two of you.
Rex, too, had been quietly observing, but it was clear from his relaxed posture that he was relieved. Everyone had come out of the mission alive, but the tension was far from gone.
You turned your attention back to Echo, noticing how his eyes occasionally flickered toward the viewport. The stars outside were nothing compared to the turmoil inside him, and it hurt you to see him struggling.
You shifted in your seat and, without thinking, reached across the aisle to gently nudge his arm. "You know, I've had my fair share of carbon freezing," you joked softly, trying to lighten the mood. "So I can't say I'm jealous of you getting to do it again."
Echo blinked, looking at you as a quiet smile tugged at his lips. "I think I've had enough of it for a lifetime," he said with a soft chuckle. "That last time wasn't exactly a vacation."
Your heart fluttered at the sound of his voice, the way the tension in his shoulders relaxed. You shared a brief moment of eye contact before he looked back at the stars, and you took the opportunity to close the distance just slightly, your hand brushing against his. It was a small gesture, but it spoke volumes in that quiet moment.
The Marauder continued its journey through the void, the hum of the ship's engines filling the air. But it wasn't just the ship that seemed to hum nowâit was the quiet connection between you and Echo, something that had always been there, unspoken. The bond between the two of you felt more tangible now, as if the events of the mission had brought you even closer together.
Wrecker, still in the back, called out over his shoulder, "Hey, you two going to just stare at each other the whole ride, or are we finally going to get a real conversation out of you?"
Echo let out a quiet laugh, his eyes flicking to you with a playful, almost sheepish expression. "I think we're getting there."
You couldn't help but grin at the playful teasing, but your heart was racing. A brief glance passed between you, and for just a moment, you felt like the weight of everythingâthe war, the danger, the missionâfaded into the background. It was just you and him, the connection between you two solidifying in that quiet space.
Echo's voice was lower now, more intimate as he leaned slightly closer. "I don't know how to say this, but... I'm glad you were here. I don't think I could have made it through this without you."
Your chest tightened, and for a moment, you didn't know what to say. The words were too big to express, but the warmth in your chest was enough to convey everything.
"You don't have to say anything," you replied quietly, your voice barely a whisper. "I'm just... happy you're safe."
Echo gave a small smile before his thumb brushed against the back of your hand, sending a flutter through your stomach. "Safe, but not unscathed."
The words lingered between you, but this time, it didn't feel like an obstacle. It felt like a truth you were both starting to accept. For the first time in what seemed like forever, Echo wasn't just a soldier you fought beside. He was something more. Someone more.
- - -
When the Marauder finally docked with the Republic fleet, the hangar bay was filled with the usual bustle of activity. You all disembarked, the quiet tension of the mission still hanging in the air. Everyone's expressions were marked by the weight of what had just happened.
Echo, though physically alive and well, still seemed lost in his thoughts. The Bad Batch, as usual, carried on with their typical behavior, but there was a more subdued air about them. Hunter gave a curt nod of approval as you all made your way toward the command center.
As you walked together, Echo's hand brushed against yours again, a simple, tender touch that made your heart skip. You looked at him, your breath catching in your throat.
"Well, I guess we're back," you said with a light smile. "Not exactly how I imagined the rescue would go."
Echo smirked, his fingers lingering on yours.
Your heart swelled at the softness in his eyes as he looked down at you. You couldn't help the smile that spread across your face, the affection clear in your gaze.
Before either of you could speak again, Rex came up beside you, giving you a teasing look. "Hey, I don't know what's going on between you two, but I'm pretty sure you're both walking into a warzone if you don't get it together soon."
Echo chuckled, his face reddening just a little. "Rex is right, you know. Maybe we should take some time to... figure things out."
You nodded, your heart racing. "I think that's a good idea."
Wrecker, who had been trailing behind, chimed in from a distance. "Oh great! Another love story brewing on this ship. I hope it's not as dramatic as the last one!"
You and Echo exchanged a playful glance, both of you rolling your eyes at Wrecker. Amused but not wanting to pry on the Batch's secret love lives.
With your hand still in his, Echo leaned in slightly, his voice soft. "I'm not going anywhere. Not this time."
You smiled, feeling an overwhelming sense of peace settle over you. "Good. Because I don't think I could do this without you."
The two of you walked side by side toward the command center, the quiet between you now a comfortable one. You had no idea what the future held, but in that moment, you knew one thing for sureâyou and Echo had finally found something worth holding onto.
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Part 2
The transmission came through encryptedâpriority red. Only one man used that level for you.
Palpatine.
You were already on a job halfway across the mid rim, credits in hand, target bleeding out behind you. But the moment his message came through, you abandoned everything. You didnât hesitate.
Meet me at the Jedi Temple. Do not be late. â S.P.
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Youâd walked into war zones with less tension in your shoulders.
The Temple was beautiful in the way ancient weapons areâelegant, polished, deadly. You moved past towering statues and sacred halls, every Jedi you passed giving you the same look: mistrust. Unease.
Good. Let them squirm.
As the war room doors slid open with a soft hiss, all eyes turned to you.
You stepped in slow, measured, the weight of a dozen stares pressing down your spine like a blade. The room was war incarnateâstrategy, power, command. And it watched you with silent judgment.
Standing at the forefront:
General Obi-Wan Kenobi, composed as ever, hands folded, a silent storm behind his eyes.
Beside him, Commander Cody, helmet under arm, chin set, already assessing you like a battlefield.
General Anakin Skywalker, lounging in that casual defiance he wore like armor, flanked by Captain Rex, who stood just a little too stiffly for comfort.
Then there was Master Mace Windu, an immovable pillar at the center of it all. His commander, Ponds, stood at his sideâstoic, calm, the kind of soldier who watched everything and said little.
Further down, Master Kit Fisto offered a diplomatic nod, the faintest flicker of curiosity in his eyes. His clone, Commander Monk, mirrored him: collected, but his fingers tapped an idle rhythm on his vambrace like he already expected things to go sideways.
And finally, Aayla Secura, calm and unreadable, with Commander Bly behind herâsilent, stern, and entirely unimpressed.
At the center of the room, waiting with a smug patience, stood Chancellor Palpatine.
He turned toward you with a grandfatherâs smileâone that always felt like it was hiding teeth. âMy friends,â he said, âallow me to introduce someone who has served the Republic with discretion and remarkable skill.â
You stood taller, letting your eyes sweep across the room.
âThis bounty hunter has been a valuable ally to my office for some time. Her knowledge of Separatist operations is unmatched, and her methodsâŚâ His smile deepened. ââŚare effective.â
You caught the way Codyâs jaw tightened. Rexâs brow furrowed. Bly looked like heâd rather shoot you than shake your hand. Even Winduâs expression soured like something had curdled in the Force.
âShe will accompany you on the invasion of Teth, and she has been assigned a special taskâone that is not up for discussion.â
He let the weight of that hang for a moment, then stepped aside, gesturing toward the table.
âNow, shall we begin?â
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Rex found you first.
Heâd been trailing behind Skywalker, but as soon as the war meeting ended, he broke off and caught up to you in a quiet corridor overlooking the city below.
âYouâve got some nerve,â he said without greeting.
You turned slowly, raising a brow. âMissed you too, Captain.â
He stepped closer, voice low. âWhat the hell is going on? Since when are you chummy with the Chancellor?â
You tilted your head. âDoes it matter?â
âIt does to me.â
You stared at him for a moment. That familiar crease in his brow. The way he clenched his jaw when he was confused or angryâusually both. He still looked good in his armor. Still looked at you like he wanted to pull you close and shake you at the same time.
âI do what Iâm paid for,â you said quietly. âSame as you.â
âThis is different. He trusts you. Theyâre being told to trust you. And youâve burned every side youâve ever stood on.â
You didnât answer.
And thatâs when Skywalker appeared behind him.
âIf the Chancellor trusts her,â Anakin said, arms crossed, âthen so do I.â
Rexâs mouth parted, confused.
You looked between them. Skywalkerâs gaze wasnât warmâit wasnât trusting, not really. It was calculated. He was watching how Rex would respond. How you would react. Testing.
âWell,â you said after a beat, âthatâs one of us.â
Skywalker smirked, then walked off without another word.
You and Rex stood in silence.
âIâm not the enemy, Rex,â you said softly.
He looked at you for a long time.
âI just donât know who you are anymore.â
And then he walked away.
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Teth was chaos.
The invasion was in full swingâblaster fire lighting up the canyons, LAATs screaming across the sky, droids collapsing by the dozen under the Jedi-led assault. You were technically assigned to General Securaâs squadâbut âassignedâ was a loose term. In truth, you were never meant to stay.
Not according to the Chancellor.
Your objective wasnât battle.
It was extraction.
One target. A child. The son of a Separatist senator. Rumors whispered of his giftsâhow things floated when he was upset, how animals followed him like shadows, how he dreamed of things that hadnât happened yet.
Force-sensitive.
Palpatine wanted him. And the war on Teth was just the perfect smoke screen to get in and get out unseen.
You were already dressed for infiltrationâslim-cut armor under your usual gear, hair pulled back, weapons light but sharp. You slipped into one of the forward camps to âcheck inâ before vanishing into the deeper jungle. Just long enough to draw attentionâand spark some tension.
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You strolled into the republic outpost with a slow sway in your hips, sweat glistening at your collarbone, a bit of battlefield grit clinging to your boots. The clones were mid-prep, chatter low and urgent.
Commander Monk caught your eye firstâleaning against a crate, half-armored, running diagnostics on a vibroblade. He looked up when you approached, a slow smirk forming as he straightened.
âWell,â he said, voice smooth and lazy. âThey didnât say youâd be this pretty.â
You tilted your head, smirking. âThey say a lot of things. Some of them are even true.â
He stepped closer, eyes flicking from your face to your hips. âTell meâare you here to help with the front lines, or just give the troops something nice to look at before they die?â
You leaned in, close enough for your breath to ghost across his jaw. âWhat if I said both?â
Behind you, Commander Cody passed by with a datapad, slowing just slightly as he caught your voice. His expression was unreadable, but the sideways glance he shot Monk was cold.
A few steps behind him, Rex came into view, muttering something to a trooper. When his eyes landed on youâand how close you were to Monkâhis jaw tensed so tight you could hear his teeth grind.
You grinned to yourself.
âAnyway,â you said, pulling back from Monk, âIâm off. Try not to miss me too much.â
He raised a brow. âCanât make any promises.â
You winkedâand slipped out of camp like a ghost.
The childâs location was buried deep within a fortified compoundâa Separatist safehouse tucked into the cliffs. He was guarded, but not like a military asset. More like a precious heir.
You got in easy.
You always did.
The boy couldnât have been more than eight. Pale-skinned, solemn-eyed, with dark curls and quiet power that made the hairs on your arms rise. When you reached for him, he didnât flinch. Just asked:
âAre you going to kill me?â
âNo,â you said gently. âIâm getting you out of here.â
He didnât resist.
He followed.
You stole a sleek Separatist craft on your way outâjust one of a dozen abandoned during the Republicâs assault. Before long, you were rising through Tethâs atmosphere, the battle shrinking beneath you like a dying ember.
You didnât check in with the Jedi.
Didnât respond to transmissions.
Just disappeared.
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The rendezvous was barren, wind-swept rock. Palpatineâs shuttle waited like a dark bird, wings hunched, engines humming.
You stepped off your stolen ship, the boy at your side, hand in yours.
Palpatine stood waiting. Hooded. Smiling faintly.
âIt is done,â you said.
He gestured. Two guards took the childâgently, but without warmth. The boy looked back at you once, uncertain. You gave him the softest nod you could manage.
When the guards disappeared with him into the shadows, you turned to the Chancellor.
âWhat do you want with him?â
Silence.
You stepped forward. âYou said Iâd be paid. You didnât say Iâd be complicit in whatever that was.â
Palpatineâs smile thinned. âYouâve done a great service to the Republic. I advise you not to question what you donât understand.â
You held his gaze.
And then turned and walked away.
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The battle was won.
The Separatist forces had scattered like ashes in a storm. Tethâs jungle was a smoking mess of twisted metal, scorched bark, and the distant whine of injured ships groaning through the atmosphere.
But despite the victory, the war room was tense. Too tense.
Because one particular wildcard had vanished.
âShe was last seen in Sector Eight,â Rex said, tapping a red blinking point on the holomap. âNear the outer ridge, just after we pushed through the southern lines.â
âShe gave some excuse about âscouting ahead,ââ Cody added, arms crossed tight over his chest. âBut no oneâs heard from her since. No comms. No visual confirmation.â
Skywalker paced. âYou think she ran?â
âI donât know what to think,â Rex said, jaw clenched. âShe was being vague the whole campaign. Smiling like she had a secret.â
Obi-Wan raised a brow, ever calm. âShe always has a secret.â
Across the table, Master Winduâs expression was carved from stone. âAnd the Chancellor insisted she be included in this operation?â
âYes,â Kenobi confirmed, voice edged. âPersonally. Claimed she could be trusted. That her presence would be an asset.â
âShe hasnât just disappeared,â said Aayla, frowning. âShe vanishedâmid-campaign. No distress signal, no call for evac, no trace.â
Maceâs voice was low and hard. âI donât like it.â
From the shadows near the edge of the tent, Commander Monk muttered, âI liked it just fine until she ghosted.â
Rex gave him a sharp look. âYouâre saying she planned it?â
âIâm saying someone who moves like that doesnât just wander off.â
Skywalker crossed his arms, uneasy. âSheâs not exactly known for sticking to orders.â
Cody shook his head, expression grim. âSheâs not one of us. She was never one of us. She does what sheâs paid to do.â
âAnd whoâs paying her now?â Mace asked.
Silence.
They all glanced at each other.
And that silence was louder than the gunfire outside.
Later that night Rex stood at the edge of the jungle, helmet off, listening to the forest hiss and settle. His grip tightened on the comm link in his handâstatic was all it offered.
âShe didnât even say goodbye,â he muttered.
Behind him, Cody walked up, quiet as always.
âShe didnât have to.â
Rex sighed. âShe was talking to Monk before she left. Laughing. Flirting.â
âYou jealous?â
Rex didnât answer.
Cody gave a humorless chuckle. âWe both know she was never going to stay.â
Rexâs jaw flexed. âI still want to know what she took with her.â
âMe too,â Cody murmured. âMe too.â
They stood there in silence, staring out at the smoke, wondering where the hell youâd goneâand what kind of game you were playing now.
Because disappearing without a trace was one thing.
Disappearing under the nose of two Jedi Generals, four clone commanders, and an entire battalion?
That meant you werenât just clever.
You were dangerous.
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The light was soft. Too soft.
The war had made the Jedi wary of stillness, and yet the Council chambers were quiet, every breath measured as Windu finished reviewing the final report.
âShe vanished mid-operation,â he said, tapping the datapad. âLeft her assigned sector without clearance. Never checked in. The child of a high-ranking Separatist senator was confirmed missing within the same timeframe.â
Obi-Wan nodded, arms folded in his robes. âIâve already confirmed with Republic Intelligence. The senatorâs entire estate was found abandoned two days after our withdrawal from Teth.â
âShe was never meant to be embedded in that sector,â Aayla added, sharp. âShe insisted on being close to the front. Claimed she worked best that way.â
Kit Fisto let out a low hum. âAnd yet she slipped past Jedi, clones, and Separatist scanners. Not many could pull that off.â
âSheâs not just some bounty hunter,â Windu said. âAnd itâs time we stop pretending otherwise.â
Anakin looked up from where he sat near the window, frowning. âYou think sheâs a spy?â
âI think sheâs dangerous,â Windu said. âToo close to the Chancellor. Too good at disappearing.â
Master Yodaâs eyes opened slowly. âWarn the Chancellor, we must. Dangerous this could become.â
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The office was dimly lit when the Jedi arrived, cloaks still dusted with the desert wind from Teth.
Palpatine greeted them with his usual gentle smile, hands folded, tone gracious. âMasters. What can I do for you?â
Windu stepped forward. âThis is about your⌠associate. The bounty hunter.â
Palpatine raised a brow. âAh. Her. Yes. A most resourceful ally.â
âShe disappeared during a mission we allowed her to join,â Obi-Wan said carefully. âAnd the child of a Separatist senator vanished at the same time.â
âAnd she has yet to report to anyone,â Windu added. âNot to the Jedi. Not to the Republic.â
âShe reported to me,â Palpatine replied smoothly. âShe was carrying out a parallel task under my authority. And she completed it. Efficiently.â
Winduâs voice darkened. âWhy were we not informed?â
The Chancellorâs expression didnât change. âBecause the mission was delicate. Sensitive. And because I am well within my rights to employ allies of the Republic when circumstances require.â
âShe cannot be trusted,â Windu pressed. âAnd if she continues to operate under Republic protectionââ
âShe served the Republic,â Palpatine interrupted, voice suddenly steely beneath the velvet. âShe followed orders. She succeeded where others failed. And I personally look forward to working with her again.â
A beat of silence.
âIâd advise you to show her the respect sheâs earned.â
The Jedi exchanged tight looks. None spoke.
But in that silence, something changed.
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The music thrummed low, the scent of Corellian whiskey and fried rations thick in the air. Clones lounged around battered metal tables, laughter and banter bouncing off the walls as holo-screens flickered with highlights from the latest front.
Rex sat with a few of his men near the backâFives, Jesse, and Kix, boots up, drinks half-empty, a rare moment of peace carved from chaos.
Then the bar doors slid open, and everything changed.
You stepped inside like you owned the placeâblack gloves, low-slung blaster, a smirk like a secret, and just enough sway in your step to turn every head. And you wanted it that way.
âWell, wellâŚâ you purred, eyes locking with Rex. âStill alive, Captain?â
Rex blinked, caught between surprise and irritation. âYouâve got some nerve showing up here.â
âI missed you,â you said sweetly, sliding into the booth uninvited. âDidnât you miss me?â
Jesse let out a low whistle.
âYou ghost us mid-campaign, and now you wanna play friendly?â Rex muttered, jaw tight.
You tilted your head, reaching for one of the drinks at the table without asking. âYouâre cute when youâre grumpy, Rex.â
âSheâs dangerous,â Kix murmured under his breath, nudging Fives.
âSheâs hot,â Fives corrected.
You winked at him.
Rex glared.
âYouâre drawing attention,â he said through clenched teeth.
âI am the attention, sweetheart,â you replied, leaning in just a little too close. âDonât act like you donât love it.â
Then you stood just as suddenly, smoothing your jacket. âAnyway. Just wanted to say hi. You boys behave now.â
You turned on your heel and made for the door, leaving Rex simmering in the wake of too much perfume and not enough answers.
You stepped out into the cool evening air, only to come face to face with a familiar Jedi.
Kit Fisto.
He stood still, robes draped around him like calm waters, but his expression was taut. Watchful.
âMaster Fisto,â you said lightly. âDidnât peg you for the bar scene.â
âI wasnât in the bar,â he replied evenly. âI was watching it.â
You raised a brow. âWell, thatâs not creepy at all.â
He ignored the jab. âYouâve been avoiding the Temple. Avoiding questions.â
âBusy girl,â you said. âChancellor keeps me on a tight leash.â
Kit stepped closer. âYou disappeared during an active campaign. Then reappeared on Coruscant with no debrief. And now youâre⌠fraternizing.â
You smirked. âWith who, exactly?â
âThe clones,â he said simply. âRex. His men. I saw how you looked at them.â
âMaybe I like men in armor,â you replied, flippant.
âOr maybe,â Kit said, voice low and steady, âyouâre gathering leverage. Getting too close. Making soldiers trust you.â
Your smile faded just a little.
He didnât flinch.
âYouâre not a Jedi,â he said. âYouâre not bound by our code. But they are still our men. And I donât know what game youâre playing with them, but I see through it.â
You stared at him for a beat, silence thick with tension.
Then you stepped close, eyes narrowed with challenge. âYou donât like me, thatâs fine. But donât mistake attraction for manipulation, Master Jedi. You should know better.â
Kitâs expression didnât change. âThen prove me wrong.â
You lingered, lips twitching.
But then you were gone, slipping back into the shadows with a flutter of your coatâleaving only questions behind.
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