If Your Plot Feels Flat, STUDY It! Your Story Might Be Lacking...

If your plot feels flat, STUDY it! Your story might be lacking...

Stakes - What would happen if the protagonist failed? Would it really be such a bad thing if it happened?

Thematic relevance - Do the events of the story speak to a greater emotional or moral message? Is the conflict resolved in a way that befits the theme?

Urgency - How much time does the protagonist have to complete their goal? Are there multiple factors complicating the situation?

Drive - What motivates the protagonist? Are they an active player in the story, or are they repeatedly getting pushed around by external forces? Could you swap them out for a different character with no impact on the plot? On the flip side, do the other characters have sensible motivations of their own?

Yield - Is there foreshadowing? Do the protagonist's choices have unforeseen consequences down the road? Do they use knowledge or clues from the beginning, to help them in the end? Do they learn things about the other characters that weren't immediately obvious?

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10 months ago

Talia: Freedom

a comic panel showing talia al ghul in a black skin-tight ish suit, with two gauntlets on her arms, talking into a headpiece and looking around as she is in front of a computer console. she says "because this time I have been used callously by him. Because I have had enough of being a pawn in my father's endless schemes.
there is a comic panel, mostly in silhouette, showing talia in a suit with a skirt, in an office, leaning over her desk. her narration box reads "Will I never be more than a tool in my father's hand?"
there is a comic panel, in a reduced color palette (mostly grays and greens) showing bruce wayne as batman in the foreground, Talia al ghul in a swimsuit, standing with her weight on a cane, and a guy in trunks walking away in the background. Bruce grimaces and looks away and Talia says "I am tired of being a pawn in the struggle between you two. If you seek my father..."
next comic panel, in full color, shows bruce wayne (as batman)'s body lying on the ground, unconscious. a narration box from talia reads "You were dead, Bruce, and with your passing you took all my dreams of love and freedom with you."
there is a panel of Talia's face. she says "There is no 'honor' in assassin's work... and frankly, I tire of my father's manipulations. All I wish is peace for myself... and for my beloved."
there is a comic panel showing talia, holding a gun in her hand and standing above bruce (batman)'s unconscious body, with some blood coming from his mouth. she thinks "You will not have me, Father. you have my love and devotion, but you will not have my soul. you will not have my dreams." she kneels down and kisses bruce's cheek. she think "As long as Bruce is alive, my hope for love and freedom are alive. That is iwhy you sent me, father. And that is why I cannot kill him. Good-bye, my love."
there's a comic showing bruce as batman leaning towards Talia, who's face is in the foreground and large, and he says "And you'd help me avoid such a fate, Talia?" Talia says "To the death -- a better end than quitting." Bruce says "But why do you want to help me? Because... you love me?"
in the same art style as the last panel (continued from "because you love me") we see talia holding up a crossbow in her hand as she speaks. She is in the batcave, and jason todd robin is behind her. she says "Yes! But more than that -- because I would rather die in your world than live in his!"
there's two comic panels in all pink. talia al ghul is falling towards a bright light with her eyes shut, and then she is engulfed by the light. she thinks "and so, the foolish dreamer leaves this place, and will finally be free... forever..."
there are three comic panels at night, wit ha full moon and limited color palette (mostly greys and greens). bruce wayne as batman is standing in front of a small plane, looking around. He says "Talia?" behind him, is the silhouette of  a woman on a horse (talia al ghul). he turns and sees her there, in front of the moon, as she rides off, away from him. he says "good luck."

JLA #45, Superman: The Man of Steel #120, Detective Comics #750, Batman Chronicles #8, JLA #44, Batman Chronicles #8, Batman #400, Batman Chronicles #8 (yes, again), Detective comics #750

Anyway, just born out of my Talia and Farhad thoughts in Ram V's tec (link)... It's her thesis statement!

2 years ago

The Psychology of Talia

For throwntotheair, who has a few questions about Talia. :) I’m grouping this under a few broad questions that should bleed into answering some of the others you mentioned.

The preface of this, of course, is that all of my answers are based in the character of Talia al Ghul prior to Grant Morrison writing her. So the 30+ years of content and development we had beforehand. Grant largely ignored the fundamental pieces of her character that were recurring themes over the years, turned her into an infanticidal rapist and, generally speaking, made her as 2-dimensional as possible. His interpretation also gave Talia wildly inconsistent motives, so he is not a good measure for delving into her character.

What are her motives?

Talia has always been motivated by one thing: love. Love for her father, love for Bruce, love for Damian. Even love for the planet (though less so than Ra’s). Each step of her journey has love somewhere in the why. The primary conflict for her, especially early on, was the tug-of-war between acting for good (because of her love for Bruce) or acting for evil (because of her love for her father). 

The animated series still gives one of the best summaries of Talia’s goals, too: she says that she believes in her father’s vision for the world, but not in his means (namely mass genocide). 

Even in dealing with Damian (Morrison, again, notwithstanding), I think she meant everything for love (I’ll explain more in the ‘why did she raise him this way’ section).

When she throws Jason into the Lazarus Pit in Lost Days, her letter to him says that she has done this “for love.”

Despite her badassery, Talia is actually a very loving, empathic person (though sometimes she denies it). Either way, love is at the core of what she does. For her father, that love spills over into loyalty…most of the time.

Why the loyalty to Ra’s (Why has she never stood against him?)

Wellllll this is two parts. The first question: love and indoctrination. The second question: she has.

First we have to understand that Talia is pretty much a psychological trainwreck. In Batman Chronicles #8, we see one of the only stories that’s specifically from Talia’s point-of-view. This and Lost Days are as close as we really get to such direct access to her thoughts.

The Psychology Of Talia

Yeah. She’s messed up. We should note that Ra’s, despite his being just about Worst Dad Ever, does genuinely love Talia, in his own way.

The Psychology Of Talia
The Psychology Of Talia

Realize that Talia has been raised exclusively in Ra’s in environment (like Damian) and that the way she raised Damian was A LOT like she was raised. She’s in a place where he father is viewed as a deity, it’s this massive, powerful cult, and so there’s a level of indoctrination going on.

But that said…Even from the beginning, Talia was defying her father.

The Psychology Of Talia
The Psychology Of Talia

She thinks for herself and, growing through the years, she becomes increasingly agitated, worn down and plain ol’ fed up with her father. I would argue that in most cases, she betrays him for Bruce (or Jason, or Damian) because she knows he’s wrong.

(Prior this panel, Batman asks why Talia is betraying Ra’s, and if it’s because she loves him:)

The Psychology Of Talia
The Psychology Of Talia

Doesn’t she seem to be lacking independence?

Here’s where I think there was a massive missed opportunity. Talia, after being shot for betraying her father in Tower of Babel, nopes out and goes off on her own. She’s fed up with both Bruce AND Ra’s.

The Psychology Of Talia

Ra’s shows up and has Talia kidnapped to bring her back. She winds up rescuing Bruce one more time before leaving BOTH of them and heading off to Hong Kong, where she becomes a successful businesswoman in her own right.

At the time, Lex Luthor is about to run for president. He shows up at her door:

The Psychology Of Talia

Talia becomes CEO of LexCorp. I wish so much that more happened in this era for her. She butts heads with Superman a few times (and even teamed up once and it was awesome), but it was so under-utilized. In the end, though, she runs the long con on Luthor, willfully bankrupts LexCorp and sells off the assets to Wayne Enterprises. Mostly just to spite him.

The Psychology Of Talia

She hates Lexcorp mostly because she’s an environmentalist. And because Luthor.

So she’s this awesome independent businesswoman who manages to trick one of the smartest men in the DCU.

Unfortunately, her half-sister shows up during this era in Death and the Maidens. She kidnaps and tortures Talia by murdering her over and over and bringing her back with her Lazarus Pit. This goes on until Talia’s psyche shatters.

The Psychology Of Talia

Nyssa brainwashes Talia, first with intent to kill Ra’s. Ra’s eventually kills Talia.

The Psychology Of Talia

When Nyssa kills Ra’s, she and Talia both continue with Ra’s mission (with Nyssa as the Demon’s Head until her death). Then Talia, still brainwashed, becomes the Demon’s Head and leads into the modern area (as with Villains United which ran pretty close up to the New 52).

Why did she raise Damian in that environment?

To put it short: because it was how she was raised and because she knows it’s the only way for him to survive. When Talia was 18 (her first appearance) she was kidnapped by an enemy of her father. Her entire life has been violence, danger and bloodshed. Her father is a powerful, dangerous man in a dangerous world.

If Damian had not been trained, in her mind, he would not have survived. I think she believes it was the best way for him to be able to protect himself. Some indoctrination bleeds through (as her raising him would be post-brainwashing, though the timeline is a bit wonky). 

I hope that helps! I’ve got a lot more essays in on my blog, plus one that’s a comprehensive account of Talia’s history.

2 years ago
She’s Living My Dream Right In Front Of My Eyes.
She’s Living My Dream Right In Front Of My Eyes.

She’s living my dream right in front of my eyes.

2 years ago

Yknow Selina and Talia could also bond over their love of animals specifically cats. Talia could show her her various wild cats she has on the sanctuaries she runs, and Selina can show her all the strays she takes in. And whenever Talia sees a stray cat on the street she’ll be like “Oh there goes Sebastian.” Bc she hangs out with Selina and the cats so much yknow? Like she can help fund animal shelters in the city and provide staff that will work 24/7 dawg. It’d be cute idk

3 years ago
@ Apex Legends Let Me Write The Lore
@ Apex Legends Let Me Write The Lore

@ apex legends let me write the lore

10 months ago

hi! would you be willing to draw talia teaching baby/ toddler damian how to waltz/dance by having him stand on her feet? thank you!

THIS IS THE CUTEST THING EVER, AND I WISH I WAS BETTER AT DRAWING BECAUSE I FEEL IT'S NOT GOOD ENOUGH RAAAAAH I'M SORRY

Hi! Would You Be Willing To Draw Talia Teaching Baby/ Toddler Damian How To Waltz/dance By Having Him
Hi! Would You Be Willing To Draw Talia Teaching Baby/ Toddler Damian How To Waltz/dance By Having Him
Hi! Would You Be Willing To Draw Talia Teaching Baby/ Toddler Damian How To Waltz/dance By Having Him

I really wanted to draw them in Nanda Parbat or something like that, idk, BUT AS YOU MAY HAVE NOTICED, I DON'T KNOW HOW TO DRAW BACKGROUNDS.

...

And I'm too lazy to learn/pain.

PS: Oh my ducking God, this looks SO much darker in my phone, THIS is suffering.

2 years ago

How do I reblog something 8 million times

Hey Respawn, please stop this.

I’ve been playing Apex Legends pretty much since it came out. Took a long break on it and am finally back into now that it has crossplay but i’ve noticed something again that’s been irking me for a while now.

Hey Respawn, Please Stop This.

This.

Everything else about this skin is very nice except his hair. Not only is that shit..ugly but it’s also cultural appreciation.

As well as this,

Hey Respawn, Please Stop This.

Crypto is Korean if I’m remembering correctly and that skin is supposed to be the Hype Beast sort of style yeah. There is a PLETHORA of amazing hairstyles that are not only originally from South Korea but just in general and yet they chose a cornrow style...

I’m not even going to say anything about Wraith. Those look like grinch fingers not locks.

Now, listen. All this wouldn’t be so bad if Bangalore didn’t have the same hairstyle just in different lengths and colors for all her skins.

Hey Respawn, Please Stop This.
Hey Respawn, Please Stop This.
Hey Respawn, Please Stop This.

I love that Apex had a diverse set of characters pretty much from launch, I do! I was so excited to see that after months of playing OW and their “diverse” cast of characters. I love that they had two strong black(and incredibly attractive. Lookin at you bangalore.) women right off the bat but I don’t like seeing them waste their amazing stylistic potential by giving the all of the traditionally black hair styles to the non-black characters.

We want this:

Hey Respawn, Please Stop This.

Look at her! She looks amazing!

Not this:

Hey Respawn, Please Stop This.

No body wants to get an epic Victory Royale with rat tails on their head.

10 months ago

Why do you love Talia so much and how did your journey with DC and Talia start?

Thank you for the question! I have always had a love for Batman since I was a child, watching cartoons of his mostly. I didn’t have any access to comics when I was younger for a plethora of reasons, but I did have video games, and the Arkham series is probably one of my strongest hyper fixations. Though honestly, as much as I enjoyed Talia in Arkham city, I didn’t begin to feel a strong attachment to her character until a few years ago!

I really couldn’t tell you why. I chose to read up on her randomly and felt such a strong emotional pull towards her, stronger than anything I’ve felt. She quickly became my absolute favorite character in any media, someone I could talk about happily for hours and hours. If only I had people to talk to! It’s a genuine shame she has such a small fan base.

On the other hand, Batman was my favorite hero because of how human he is. There are a lot of human heroes but their humanity isn’t quite as striking to me as his is. One thing I adore about Batman is how silly he is, while at the same time, being extremely serious. One of the issues a lot of people seem to have, in my opinion, is taking him TOO seriously.

He’s a man in a bat costume! He drives a batmobile and uses batarangs and batclaws and that’s very silly! But he’s also a gritty detective at the same time! I LOVE BATMAN!!!

I like plenty of other DC characters, but the Gotham bunch are definitely my favorites 😙


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