Wait Don't Unfollow Me, I'm Complex And Morally Ambiguous

"came back wrong" what about Came Back Afraid. You used to be brave. Too brave maybe, defying the odds at every turn, a fighter, cocky, playing with fire, first to throw yourself at the enemy. Until one day it all caught up to you. You came back, somehow, but now you know all too intimately how it feels to lose, to die, to be destroyed. Now you flinch and freeze and cower at the slightest provocation. Who even are you now if you can't be brave? The grave may have let you go, but the mortal fear still grips you tighter than ever.

The dynamic of "scientist who wants to fuck the thing they're studying" gets exponentially better the further removed from the biological sciences you get.

Xenobiologist wanting to bang an alien is old news. Give me a programmer in love with his computer. Quantum physicist who gets horny when he gets to operate the partical accelerator. Do you understand

Use "said" for dialogue unless you are writing a man talking, in which case use "whimpered"

[about my own oc, who i created] in theory its possible she would say that, but we just dont know for sure

I’m sorry if you try to talk to me and I ignore you, I am not really present or sound of mind

Your friends watching something for the first time and getting to that scene VS you, the knower.

what if you matched my freak AND my loving heart huh