Tried To Depict The First Scene From @unshackled-if With My MC!

IT IS UPDATE TIME! For those of you who missed the dirty draft in the discord, the original play link has now been updated with 35 thousand words and two chapters sizzling with exposition, and heated rivalry. I'm so excited!

Here's what's new:

Before we start, it took some honest critique for something to click for me, plot wise. I have been meandering with the plot, partly because I had no idea what I was even doing, and part because I really wanted to meander around in this new medium. But, the plot I have planned is very high octane and epic in scale so I don’t want to bore you to death before we get to the good stuff.

So, don’t hunt me for sport when I tell you that (for the time being) I have removed the entire section of RO 101’s. I was so stubborn with shoehorning them in for the better part of a year, leading to writer's block and utter despair since it just wouldn’t fit; it wasn’t how you were supposed to learn about the RO’s. I have put them aside for now and tweaked Lenas scene once more so that it flows better- I am hemming and hawing over Id’s 101 because that one actually makes sense to have there, plotwise. It might go back in where it was, but I am still thinking about it.

Ok, for real this time though:

The scenes where you scream and your RO busts down the door Kool-Aid man style are there now.

A meeting with Oma and a blast from your [origin] past!

A whole chapter of lies and deceit, but it could literally be anyone lying. Careful who to trust.

Is that… [REDACTED]?? Surely not.

Another chapter where you get to choose your weapons and the way the Surge manifests with your hunter.

On topic of the surge, the magic in Ouro, it is now a default for all players; you can choose from 4 different classes. The Battlefrenzied Zealot, The Beastmaster, The Etherweaver or The Vox Psion. I had a terrible time writing the codexes for these classes, so some are partial and others missing, but if you continue you will experience them in actual action-scenes instead, weaponized. Don't forget to save! For now, each class comes with its own weapon, but I will add more whenever extra time strikes, or when the draft is done.  I am going to remind you as I remind myself: This draft will get rougher around the edges, a little bit messy, as I am going to try to just draft the whole thing without even looking back. It will make my life so much easier when it comes to figuring out key scenes and motivations. While I wrote quite slowly as I treated OUROBOROS as a hobby, now I am working on it, which means skipping content I cannot think of on the spot just to keep the ball rolling. If you don't want to read the alpha draft, please wait with reading until the edited twine demo is out. Thank you!!

Now, ENJOY!

hello☺️ welcome back!!

I’m happy to be back!!

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Returning home yesterday was such a relief. I’m so happy I can finally return to writing! <3

How would the RO's react when they realize they fall in love with Mc?

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Also I wanted to ask if you were okay with nsfw ask? So that I know that wether or not your comfortable with it and if not then it's already!👍

Hey anon, sorry for the late reply. I just wanted to announce all the ROs so I can answer your ask fully! ;)

How would the ROs react when they realize they have fallen in love with the MC?

Aurelian: At first, he may feel a sense of confusion and surprise at his own emotions. As someone who has always been focused on ambitions and goals, the idea of being in love is foreign and confusing to him.

Furthermore, Aurelian's possessiveness may lead him to struggle with his feelings towards MC. He may see them as a possession to be claimed rather than a person with their own desires. This could lead to him becoming controlling and demanding more time with the MC.

When Aurelian comes to terms with his feelings for the MC, he would gift them everyday items that they love or even things he heard them say they wanted, for example, "Hmm, I'm craving strawberries." The next day? The MC's room is filled with boxes of strawberries and the garden of the castle is filled with them. He would use words of admiration day and night.

Elara: As someone who has always placed a strong emphasis on knowledge and education, she may initially try to rationalize or analyze her feelings, attempting to understand the reasons behind her attraction. However, as she spends more time with MC, she becomes increasingly drawn to them and comes to terms with her feelings.

Elara would think about the MC frequently, even when they are not in the same room. She would daydream about their conversations or interactions. Elara would get very nervous and flustered around them; she may stumble over her words or blush when they speak to her, or feel butterflies in her stomach when they are near.

Kazuo: Given his past experiences, Kazuo would struggle with feelings of insecurity or self-doubt. He may worry that his feelings for the MC are not reciprocated, or that his identity as a lycan makes him unworthy of love. This could cause him to become withdrawn or distant around the MC. At the same time, Kazuo feels a deep sense of admiration towards the MC, viewing them as a source of hope and inspiration in his life. He would be overprotective and supportive, going to great lengths to ensure their safety.

Aiden/Ava: Their feelings would lead them to feelings of uncertainty or insecurity as they try to navigate their growing emotions for MC. They may feel a sense of longing or desire to be closer to MC. They would see MC as a source of comfort in an otherwise chaotic and unpredictable world. They may go out of their way to help or support them, even if it means putting their own needs or responsibilities aside. They would offer to assist the MC with tasks or listen to their problems, telling them that they will always be there for them no matter what.

And yes, I'm okay with nsfw questions. However, I will list the things I'm uncomfortable with on the pinned post later, just for a heads up.

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NSFW asks: What are the ROs preferences in bed? And what are their kinks?

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Aurelian: he’s mostly a top and leaning towards being a dom, but he would bottom depending on his partner. ;)

Kinks:

Marking/claiming [giving and receiving], body worship, praise [mostly receiving], overstimulation [giving], biting [both]

Elara: bottom and leaning towards sub but depending on her partner can be a demanding dom.

Kinks:

Praise [mostly giving], on a desk(😳), comfort [both], biting [receiving], teasing [both]

Kazuo: a total top and dom.

Kinks:

Biting/scratching [both], scent, marking/claiming [giving], against a wall/tree(🫣), clingy/comfort [giving]

Aiden/Ava: verse and can be a dom but mostly leaning towards sub.

Kinks:

Bondage(hands but not roughly), biting [mostly giving], praise [receiving], marking/ownership [giving], overstimulation and edging [both]

SC: verse and a total dom.

Kinks:

Teasing [giving], dirty talk [giving], biting/scratching [both], marking/claiming [mostly giving], begging [from partner]

tehee…

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