Trying To Decided If I Should Go Back And Add My Ideas For The Chapters Ive Written An Update Or Just

this is a little bit like inventing a calculator, but the calculator is proprietary so everyone in the world has to go to your building to use the one really big calculator. the lines are massive so you have to spend millions building a disney fast pass system and all the while you’re freaking out because you’re spending $700,000 a day in electricity and water to cool down the calculator radiating heat like the sun because 800 million people are using it to write work emails and draw boobs

People should make more doomed by narratives siblings relationship.

Like with lovers you can just sever it and not have it related to you ever again but with siblings how could you?

You grow up with them you raise them or they raised you you both know how unforgiving the world is to both of you? You would die for them but will hate them for doing the same and yet none of you would regret it and both of you know it. They could be the person you loath the most and miss the most cause you still remember how they sneaked a candy into your hands. You can sever the tie but you can never look away at what you've lost, at whom you've lost because fate doesn't allow you to be together, eating dinners in quiet peace, if only there's another life, another time, where i can make you another plate of pancakes i would im sorry im sorry im sorry —

Chapters: 6/? Fandom: Five Nights at Freddy's, Five Nights at Freddy's: Security Breach - Fandom Rating: Mature Warnings: Graphic Depictions Of Violence Relationships: Moon/Sun (Five Nights at Freddy's)/Original Character(s), Moon/Sun (Five Nights at Freddy's)/Original Male Character(s), Moon & Sun (Five Nights at Freddy's) & Original Character(s) Characters: Moon (Five Nights at Freddy's), Sun (Five Nights at Freddy's), Original Characters, Montgomery Gator (Five Nights at Freddy's), Glamrock Freddy (Five Nights at Freddy's), Glamrock Chica (Five Nights at Freddy's), Glamrock Animatronics (Five Nights at Freddy's), Roxanne Wolf (Five Nights at Freddy's), DJ Music Man (Five Nights at Freddy's), Daycare Attendant (Five Nights at Freddy's), Original Male Character(s), Original Female Character(s), Vanessa A. | Ness, Original Child Character(s) Additional Tags: Violence, Blood and Violence, Eventual Romance, Slow Burn, Robot/Human Relationships, Implied Child Death, Other Additional Tags to Be Added, Not Beta Read Summary:

After getting fired from another job, Nathan feels as if his luck couldn't be lower. Trying to provide a life for him and his daughter, he's given an opportunity he can't refuse: a security job at Freddy Fazbear's Mega Pizzaplex. Soon he has to figure out a way to survive glitching animatronics, eerie coworkers, and find out why he's seeing the children who've been missing for months inside the Pizzaplex.

gril chee :3

i am not immune to stories in which characters who have endured harsh, empty existences become absolutely transformed by someone’s sincere love for them and learn to live

Summary:

Everybody knows that the underbelly of the city are the ones that call the shots. From the police to the mayor himself, everybody is in somebodies pocket. And when those who rule from the shadows have not only the money but strength to keep everyone in an iron fist, there's none who would try to disrupt the status quo.

That is, until a certain attack dog of Eclipse takes the wrong job.

Cathal soon has to rely on two rookie detectives to uncover what he has gotten himself into while trying to keep up appearances with a certain mob boss.

one of the most ship dynamics of all time

whoops

Me: Man I really should finish the next few chapters for Entanglement and Killer

Also Me: *writes Messmer/Tarnished instead*

Some of my favorite words and phrases to describe a character in pain

coiling (up in a ball, in on themselves, against something, etc)

panting (there’s a slew of adjectives you can put after this, my favorites are shakily, weakly, etc)

keeling over (synonyms are words like collapsing, which is equally as good but overused in media)

trembling/shivering (additional adjectives could be violently, uncontrollably, etc)

sobbing (weeping is a synonym but i’ve never liked that word. also love using sob by itself, as a noun, like “he let out a quiet sob”)

whimpering (love hitting the wips with this word when a character is weak, especially when the pain is subsiding. also love using it for nightmares/attacks and things like that)

clinging (to someone or something, maybe even to themselves or their own clothes)

writhing/thrashing (maybe someone’s holding them down, or maybe they’re in bed alone)

crying (not actual tears. cry as in a shrill, sudden shout)

dazed (usually after the pain has subsided, or when adrenaline is still flowing)

wincing (probably overused but i love this word. synonym could be grimacing)

doubling-over (kinda close to keeling over but they don’t actually hit the ground, just kinda fold in on themselves)

heaving (i like to use it for describing the way someone’s breathing, ex. “heaving breaths” but can also be used for the nasty stuff like dry heaving or vomiting)

gasping/sucking/drawing in a breath (or any other words and phrases that mean a sharp intake of breath, that shite is gold)

murmuring/muttering/whispering (or other quiet forms of speaking after enduring intense pain)

hiccuping/spluttering/sniffling (words that generally imply crying without saying crying. the word crying is used so much it kinda loses its appeal, that’s why i like to mix other words like these in)

stuttering (or other general terms that show an impaired ability to speak — when someone’s in intense pain, it gets hard to talk)

staggering/stumbling (there is a difference between pain that makes you not want to stand, and pain that makes it impossible to stand. explore that!)

recoiling/shrinking away (from either the threat or someone trying to help)

pleading/begging (again, to the threat, someone trying to help, or just begging the pain to stop)

Feel free to add your favorites or most used in the comments/reblogs!