Who’s next?
go write three sentences on your current writing project.
Spoiler alert: it’s a parent trap situation
You are a god whose most devout follower is marrying your rival God’s follower. Normally that wouldn’t be a problem except you both are asked to bless the union, and for that both of you must attend.
Home Is Where The Heart Was
My chest was a home
Filled with warmth and light and love
My sternum the front door
That had welcomed many a friend and family
My ribs were once brightly painted siding,
A soft gray exterior that protected the treasures inside
My heart pumped hot water through my arteries
Providing warmth for nightly baths and mugs of hot cocoa
My lungs were the sturdy walls that kept the roof above our heads
My diaphragm the soft carpeting and cool wood
That had known running and cuddles from feet and paws alike
My spinal cord and nerves kept the lights on and the temperature just right
My vertebrae were a strong foundation
Solid and secure, keeping everything upright
My chest is an old, abandoned house
My sternum is the slamming storm door
The broken latch leaving it to swing wide in the wind
My ribs, the battered siding
Years of abandonment leaving them caked in dirt and grime
Termites and rot have eaten through the panels, leaving gaping wounds
My heart is the failing water heater
My arteries are the corroded copper pipes
My lungs are the creaking walls
Shifting and sinking, slowly collapsing
The wood floors of my diaphragm have sunken in, and the carpet is threadbare
Torrents of tears have seeped in through the leaky roof,
Now darkness grows from rotted wounds and mold scars stale strands
My spinal cord is the busted breaker box; My nerves: fraying electrical wires
My vertebrae are the crumbling foundation
My chest will be condemned someday
Caved in like a house of cards, not wood and stone
The love it once housed has moved on
And its protection is no longer needed
There will be no one there to witness it’s fall
And no one to grieve for the memories lost
- A. Yenzer
He’s been chasing me for centuries for stealing that bottle. I’m not about to let him catch me now.
You drank a snake oil salesman’s drink only for it to make you actually immortal in the old west now 300 years later you see that same salesman
Me! It’s for me! Thank you very much!
you ever start describing a character and accidentally give them an entire anthropology backstory? like, why does this random baker suddenly have a tragic past involving forbidden love, a war, and a cursed necklace? who is this for?
I call it a “pen drop”
does anyone else write a sentence so good you have to lean back in your chair and just vibe with the sheer power of it? like yeah, i, ME, did that.
How many tears had the Doctor shed,
Before his sorrow was thoroughly fed?
How many times has the Doctor wept,
Comfortless, until he slept?
Each day, after the close,
It was enough to water a Rose.
When he realized she could never come home,
And that he was left to hopelessly roam.
After the angel made them blink,
And she said goodbye with a final wink;
Nourishing an almost bond,
Flowed enough to fill two Ponds.
Finally, a River,
And, alone, he was left to shiver;
When after the final breath,
Greeted like an old friend, was Death.
- A. Yenzer
“Burn.”
The power of a spell is inversely proportional to the amount of words in its name. You, hated and exiled, invented the first single word spell:
I scream “SCREW YOU”
To the lies I tell myself
Insecurity runs rampant
In a head full of the voices of others
Hatred and jealousy spawn venomous words
And insults that burn
Like acid in the blood
And shred self confidence
So combat fire with fire
Until hate has no more fuel to burn
And the words of others
No longer sting
Spit venom at that hateful voice
Until the infection of their jealous words
Is burned out by the fever of self-love and spite
- A. Yenzer
Fallen soldiers, from wars old and new, never stop fighting. They just have a different war to fight.
Sailors who die on sunken ships fight the monsters of the deep from pulling the ships of the living down to the depths. Ships with smashed hulls and broken masts, submarines with gaping holes in their sides rise from their graves at the bottom of the ocean and protect the living from the monsters of old.
Pilots of the newer wars have found themselves fighting the ones who can fly, the monsters that would steal a child off the street or a beloved pet from their yard. Until the first of these new fallen, attempting to fend the flying ones off was almost futile. But now ghost planes with broken wings and burning engines patrol the skies.
Warriors struck down on the battlefield fend off the monsters of the land from taking the souls of the living that walk the earth. Their axes and swords, bows and arrows, even calvary horses are some of the only things that allow the living to believe fairy tales are just tales.
A soldier never stops being a soldier, even in death. To them, it’s worth everything. To continue protecting those they love and all who come after.
- A. Yenzer
It will develop like everything else through time, care, and effort.
it’s okay if your prose is ugly right now. it’s just pre-gorgeous.