Before the Anger- episode 52, "Long Story (pt. 2)"
From now on, every episode will be new! I'll be posting every Thursday. I'm sad that there's no more daily posting but at least now I can focus on making more episodes!
I think my next post will be BTA character sheets!
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Before the Anger- episode 51, "Long Journey (pt. 1)"
Alphys is finally showing us her mechanical side!
No side story today! We finished the last one. It gonna take a while for the next side story because I have yet to write it... and I still have to figure out what it's gonna be about lol
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Before the Anger side story:
This is the first relevant side story in BTA. It follows Chara as she first entered the underground and her fear of monsters.
Click "keep reading" to read the full side story :)
(1) Chara had no appetite. She stared at Toriel in the kitchen, who hummed a song and bounced on her feet as she crossed to the stove. The same confusion every time. Chara counted the seconds it took for Toriel to remember that her fire magic no longer worked. Exactly six. Toriel laughed to herself and turned to Chara. “Hey, sweetie, would you like to help me in the kitchen?” Chara knew exactly what was going through Toriel’s mind. “Family bonding”
(2) Chara decided to humour Toriel and joined her in the kitchen. She even pretended to smile and said, “Sure, Mother.” and seeing Toriel’s face light up made Chara’s smile genuine. What a stupid woman. Chara stood beside Toriel, looking up into her piercing eyes. Being this close to such a creature made Chara’s hands tremble, so she made a tight fist.
(3) “Here, child, you can cut up the carrots!” Toriel offered Chara a knife with a big smile. Chara’s hands felt ice cold; the knife, the sharp edges catching the light; Toriel’s disgusting, monstrous grin; her claws grasping the handle. Chara raised a hand to her mouth to cover her disgust and rushed out of the kitchen without a word. Toriel watched her leave, a confused tilt in her head.
(4) That night, Chara didn’t eat. Or the next, or the night after that. Toriel and Asgore were concerned, but being that they didn’t know much about humans, they had assumed Chara had a different diet. And in any case, the other monsters were getting curious about Chara’s existence and wanted answers, so they arranged a QnA at the castle- with Chara’s permission, of course.
(5) Today was the day of the QNA. Chara calmed her nerves and looked out on the crowd full of horrible creatures. She had no appetite. Her stomach ached. Her hands twitched. Her mouth curled into a sickening grin. As she approached the monsters, Asriel finally caught up to her side, out of breath. “Are you excited?” Asriel asked, an innocent squeak in his voice. Chara stroked his soft ear.
(6) Suddenly, Chara felt puny and defenseless against the towering, snarling, grinning monsters. They clawed for answers. Chara’s own breath suffocated her. She could hardly feel her feet as they sprinted toward any semblance of safety. But every corner was unknown, full of terrible surprises. Chara collapsed, finally, on a secluded ledge in Waterfall, curled into a ball of sobs and fear.
(7) Chara heard something behind her and jolted to attack. The second before her fist was about to land, she pulled away. It was only Asriel. Asriel was shaken, but continued toward her anyway, his eyes large with surprise. “Why’d you run away, Chara?” Chara caught her breath, soothed by his childish voice.
(8) “It’s hard to… to be the only one of your kind in a big, scary new world. Can you imagine if you landed in a world with only humans, no friends?” Chara explained. Asriel paused for a moment, then sat down in front of her. “You have me! We are friends, right?” Asriel held his breath as he waited for Chara’s response. Chara smiled and pet Asriel, “Yeah. It’s just you and me against the world, buddy.”
(9) Toriel searched for Chara and Asriel, the worst in her mind. She worried this would happen, with Chara skittish behavior around other monsters. Finally, Toriel found them in Waterfall. When she asked what happened, Asriel stood up and said “Chara and I wanted to go for a swim.” Toriel furrowed her brow. Asriel was only six years old, he had never lied to her before. Asriel clutched Chara’s sleeve with a nervous smile.
Before the Anger- episode 50, "Looooooong Story (pt. 6)"
Alphys, I think that kinda borders on immoral...
((Toriel searched for Chara and Asriel, the worst in her mind. She worried this would happen, with Chara skittish behavior around other monsters. Finally, she found them in Waterfall. When she asked what happened, Asriel stood up and said “Chara and I wanted to go for a swim.” Toriel furrowed her brow. Asriel was only six years old, he had never lied to her before. Asriel clutched Chara’s sleeve with a nervous smile.))
That was the end of that side story! Also, the end of "Looooooong Story" saga... Kinda.
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Before the Anger- episode 49, "Loooooong Story (pt. 5)"
((“It’s hard to-… to be the only one of your kind in a big, scary, new world. Can you imagine if you landed in a world with only humans, no friends?” Chara explained. Asriel paused for a moment, then sat down in front of her. “You have me! We are friends, right?” Asriel held his breath as he waited for Chara’s response. Chara smiled and pet Asriel, “Yeah. It’s just you and me against the world, buddy.”))
Chara installing manipulation early in the game lol
The BTA-Gaster-hate club is, in my head, growing exponentially every episode. Or maybe reading Before the Anger is an automatic enrollment into the BTA-Gaster-hate club. Idk, my friend still likes him for some reason....
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Before the Anger- episode 48, "Looooong Story (pt. 4)"
((Chara heard something behind her and jolted to attack. The second before her fist was about to land, she pulled away. It was only Asriel. Asriel was shaken, but continued toward her anyway, his eyes large with surprise. “Why’d you run away, Chara?” Chara caught her breath, soothed by his childish voice.))
This, coincidentally, was posted around Valentine's day! I didn't make a special for it because I forgot, but let's pretend this was the special.
A very long episode today!! Do y'all mind or should I keep making them shorter?
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Before the Anger- episode 47, "Loooong Story (pt. 3)"
((Suddenly, Chara felt puny and defenseless against the towering, snarling, grinning monsters. They clawed for answers. Chara’s own breath suffocated her. She could hardly feel her feet as they sprinted toward any semblance of safety, but every corner was full of terrible, unknown surprises. Chara collapsed, finally, on a secluded ledge in Waterfall, curled into a ball of sobs and fear.))
If I were in Chara's situation, I'd probably react the same way. However, I don't think I'd go and murder everyone... I think..
That was a joke. I've never killed anyone to your knowledge
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Before the Anger- episode 46, "Looong Story (pt. 2)"
((Today was the day of the QNA. Chara calmed her nerves and looked out on the crowd full of horrible creatures. She had no appetite. Her stomach ached. Her hands twitched. Her mouth curled into a sickening grin. As she approached the monsters, Asriel finally caught up to her side, out of breath. “Are you excited?” Asriel asked, an innocent squeak in his voice. Chara stroked his soft ear.))
There's an interesting contrast of the side story and the comic: the charming past vs. their looming future.
Well, good news, Toriel and Asgore are not related lol
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Before the Anger- episode 45, "Loong Story (pt. 1)"
((That night, Chara didn’t eat. Or the next, or the night after that. Toriel and Asgore were concerned, but being that they didn’t know much about humans, they had assumed Chara had a different diet. And in any case, the other monsters were getting curious about Chara’s existence and wanted answers, so they arranged a QnA at the castle, with Chara’s permission, of course.))
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Before the Anger side story:
I recently finished the first side story, which was just a test and hardly contributed to the episodes themselves. Now that it's done, I'm making a post where you can read it all in one spot instead of having to flick through all of the links.
Click "keep reading" to read the story! ;)
(1) Elaine was nothing but a small, barely-teenage girl when she stormed to Undyne's doorstep in search of refuge. She knocked at the door with the tips of her feet and waited for a response. She waited all night.
(2) Elaine heard footsteps behind her and quickly shot up off the doorstep. An unsuspecting Undyne stepped into her yard to see the young girl standing defiantly.
(3) Undyne noticed Elaine's eyebags and, being well acquainted with young, aspiring royal guards begging to be taught, smiled and said, "Have you been here all night?" Elaine stared, stone-faced. "Yes. I need to talk to you."
(4) Undyne titled her head and spoke humorously, "You're not trying to challenge me, are you?" she was referring to Elaine's poor condition; exhausted, dirty, and somewhat wounded. Elaine shook her head. Amused and mildly concerned, Undyne invited the strange girl into her home to chat.
(5) Undyne gestured for Elaine to sit and she awkwardly obliged. "So, a random armless kid I've never met wants to talk. I have to say, I'm intrigued" Undyne said between a laugh, setting her coat and bags on the ground.
(6) "My sister stole my arm prosthetics... and she died with them." Elaine explained. Undyne's tone immediately shifted from lighthearted to serious. She sat across from Elaine and cleared her throat, "Well, I'm sorry for your loss."
(7) “Actually, that's kind of what I wanted to talk about. I ain't got any more family left… You're kind of my last option.” Elaine bounced her leg nervously, intimidated by Undyne's stature. Undyne scoffed and raised her eyebrows, “Well, you must be pretty desperate considering we are strangers.”
(8) Elaine temporarily lost her determined posture and mumbled, “Yeah…” There was silence as they both recollected themselves. Undyne broke the quiet, “I was… in a similar position when I was a kid, about ten. I know you don't want to hear this- I know I didn't- but… you gotta get a caretaker.”
(9) Elaine recoiled subtly. She was dreading those words. Leaning back in her chair, Elaine said, “I don't want some royal stranger taking care of me.” Undyne shook her head, “Nobody does, but-” Undyne paused and quickly raised her hand to her mouth like she thought of something.
(10) “I do know somebody who recently became a caretaker.” Undyne continued, “He's one of the sweetest, most understanding people I've ever met. He's been having trouble even finding somebody to take care of since most children, y’know, run. Kinda like what you're doing.” Elaine sighed, “Okay… and who's this ‘wonderful person’?”
(11) Elaine jumped out of her chair and exclaimed, “PAPYRUS!? He's a caretaker?? When did that- how did that-” Undyne stood up to calm Elaine down. “It was very recently. I can pull some strings with the royal caretakers, easy. But do me a favor and don't mention me to Papyrus when you meet him, okay?”
(12) Seeing as the conversion was finished, Elaine started to leave, but was stopped by Undyne. “Wait,” she said, “I need a name to refer to you as.” Elaine made a dreadful sigh, knowing this question would come up. “Legally? ‘Elaine’. But nobody has ever called me that before.”
(13) “So what do they call you?” Undyne asked. Elaine shook her head and started a list, “Kid, Armless, Trippy, little Jailbird… really anything you can think of. It was the same with my mom and sister. I never even learned what their real names were.” Undyne tilted her head, shocked, “What a strange tradition. What about you? What do you WANT to be called?”
(14) Elaine had a stupid look on her face; brow furrowed, eyes wide. She had never been asked that before. Elaine inhaled, fixed her face, and looked Undyne right in the eye, “Elaine. I want to be called Elaine.”
(15) So she was. All through the process of being assigned the caretaker, people looked right at her and called her “Elaine.” She’d never felt such a feeling before. All the way to Papyrus’s house, hearing the door open, seeing his face. He smiled and said, “Elaine, it’s nice to meet you!”
(16) Elaine and Papyrus had gotten to know each other. Months had passed. They were close, like an older, responsible brother and a found sister. Papyrus wasn’t what Elaine had expected. He didn’t try to be a “father figure”, but his presence brought the same comforting energy anyway. But there was one question Elaine had: why would Papyrus quit being a royal guard?
(17) One day, Elaine had come back from royal guard training with the question burning in her mind. She mustered her courage and asked, “Papyrus, why did you… quit?” He was sitting on the couch and slowly turned to face her, like he had expected it. He sighed, “I assume they’ve taught you all about the Goddess?” Elaine raised her eyebrows. This was not the answer she’d expected.
(18) “Of course I know about her. She’s the basis of the entire royal guard!” Although it wasn’t relevant, Elaine felt compelled to say, out of pride, that, “When I was 10, I met her! Well, I think. I’m not sure, but she looked pretty human-like.” Papyrus stood from the couch and smoothed his jacket, “I met her too. Before everyone knew she was the… fallen one. I didn’t have the knowledge I do now and…” Papyrus looked uncomfortable, “Well, let’s just say, if she ever comes back, she’s not gonna be very happy with me. So I left the royal guard. I don’t deserve to protect her.”
Before the Anger- episode 44, "Annoying Kid!"
((“Here, child, you can cut up the carrots!” Toriel offered Chara a knife with a big smile. Chara’s hands felt ice cold; the knife, the sharp edges catching the light; Toriel’s disgusting, monstrous grin; her claws grasping the handle. Chara raised a hand to her mouth to cover her disgust and rushed out of the kitchen without a word. Toriel watched her leave, a confused tilt in her head.))
I love Papyrus and Sans's dynamic. There's a lot of complex psychology in the little details (do you notice a theme in these comics?)
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Before the Anger- episode 43, "A Red Pen and a Dumb Book"
((Chara decided to humour Toriel and joined her in the kitchen. She even pretended to smile and said, “Sure, Mother.” and seeing Toriel’s face light up made Chara’s smile genuine. What a stupid woman. Chara stood beside Toriel, looking up into her piercing eyes. Being this close to such a creature made Chara’s hands tremble, so she made a tight fist.))
The color red is very important in this comic. It symbolizes humanity. Gaster's speech bubble...
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Before the Anger- episode 42, "((The Year 1984.))"
((Chara had no appetite. She stared at Toriel in the kitchen humming a song and bouncing on her feet as she crossed to the stove. The same confusion every time. Chara counted the seconds it took for Toriel to remember that her fire magic no longer worked. Exactly six. Toriel laughed to herself and turned to Chara. “Hey, sweetie, would you like to help me in the kitchen?” Chara knew exactly what was going through Toriel’s mind. “Family bonding”))
Wooo! Chara is finally here! Gaster as a young adult is a lot like Alphys. Does that means something?
If you noticed, the year is wrong in this episode because it was the New Year and I forgot to change it. Also, there aren't any New Years specials in this comic because New Years is the only cannon, important holiday in BTA. That might make for some confusing timelines in the future, maybe a valentines special right before the cannon New Years lol. I guess I'll call the holiday specials uncannon.
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Before the Anger- episode 41, "Strange Tradition"
Papyrus is thinking of the other meaning of "holiday", which usually means "weekend".
Not to get too personal, but I modeled this episode after my own childhood, and while I was drawing this it actually made me emotional. Me and my siblings would search for trash and give it to each other for a makeshift "Christmas" (I'm not religious, so I wasn't celebrating anything.) I relate to these little skeleton boys more than I should lol
On a positive note, this is the first episode exclusively featuring Sans and Papyrus!
Anyway, now we can get back to that egregious cliffhanger (I'm still sorry, that's just how the schedule panned out)
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I'm sorry... I made art for something that isn't going to happen for a long while in my comic. Grillby is in Before the Anger, but it is mainly his daughter that makes any appearances. They are mainly only for comedy purposes (his daughter is also named Grillby.)
I like how dramatic this drawing is for a non-serious bit. Such minor characters deserve awesome art.
Read my comic here :)
Before the Anger- episode 40, "Student Party? (pt. 2)"
Cliff hanger! And, spoiler, the cliffhanger won't be resolved next episode because there's a Holidays special... But, after that, it'll be back!
This is episode 40! That means theres only 10 episodes until we are caught up with the WEBTOON. Once we are caught up, I will be posting them at the same time: every Thursday normally around 12pm but things happen lol. It'll be sad to say goodbye to daily-ish posting, but oh well! It may give me more time to make official art of this story, which tends to do better on tumblr.
No side story today, since we finished that last one. The next side story will start on episode 42. I'm very excited for it, and you should be too :)
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Before the Anger- episode 39, "Student Party? (pt. 1)"
We are finally learning more about Gaster and Siqua. But Alphys past still remains a mystery (I don't want to get you excited, it takes a while until we learn more about Alphys. Sorry!)
((“Of course I know about her. She’s the basis of the entire royal guard!” Although it wasn’t relevant, Elaine felt compelled to say, out of pride, that, “When I was 10, I met her! Well, I think. I’m not sure, but she looked pretty human-like.” Papyrus stood from the couch and smoothed his jacket. “I met her too. Before everyone knew she was the… fallen one. I didn’t have the knowledge I do now and…” Papyrus looked uncomfortable, “Well, let’s just say, if she ever comes back, she’s not gonna be very happy with me. So I left the royal guard. I don’t deserve to protect her.”))
The end! That was the last of this specific side story. What Papyrus said only makes sense if you have read the rewritten Under Anger, pretty much he (spoilers) tries to kill Nimiee. I'm now realizing that probably also doesn't make sense... If you want you can read it here but its unfinished.
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Before the Anger- episode 38, "That one Crybaby at the Store"
Lots of child psychology in this one! Side note- Sans is afraid of heights. Doesn't add much to the story but if you look at him in some UnderAnger panels, you can tell he is scared lol. He doesn't say anything about it, though. I LOVE PSYCHOLOGY!!!!
This episode was posted on my birthday! Congrats to myself for living this long :)
((One day, Elaine had come back from royal guard training with the question burning in her mind. She mustered her courage and asked, “Papyrus, why did you… quit?” He was sitting on the couch and slowly turned to face her, like he was expecting this. He sighed, “I assume they’ve taught you all about the Goddess?” Elaine raised her eyebrows. This was not the answer she’d expected.))
Actually, this side story has some spoilers for Under Anger: Secret Ending! I haven't got to the whole "Goddess" thing yet over there. This is some exclusive content y'all are getting 😎
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I drew this scene from my (not made yet) AU called SoapTale. Pretty much, Frisk is blind and Papyrus is like "wow it must be so cool to get to wear sunglasses all the time" and Frisk is like "actually, I don't ever wear sunglasses."
Then they come up with an amazing idea. Matching. The glamour. The soon-to-be fame. Such a awe-inspiring duo!
Meanwhile, ghost Chara just wants to take over the world.
Because my plan with the style of this comic would be to have the characters be color blocks, I actually mixed all their colors with their main color. Did that make sense? I think I should do it more often because it makes for a nice color pallete
I just said "color" a lot.
Before the Anger- episode 37, "The 'Complicated' History"
I love this episode! All the little details make my nerd heart happy. This episode has set the most timeline out of all the others so far!
((Elaine and Papyrus had gotten to know each other. Months had passed. They were close, like an older, responsible brother and a found sister. Papyrus wasn’t what Elaine had expected. He didn’t try to be a “father figure”, but his presence brought the same comforting energy anyway. But there was one question Elaine had: why would Papyrus quit being a royal guard?))
Uh oh! Some spoilers for Papyrus's future?
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The first ask of the series! Please, if you can think of anything, ASK because I want to start making more comics as soon as possible!!! I'm deprived. Go to the side blog to ask!!!! (QUESTION: Should I keep reblogging my Mr. Sleepy comics or is that confusing, y'know, having two accounts posting the comic but only one accepts asks? Maybe thats not confusing at all bc its a reblog... idk)
Bonnie that was rude :( they seemed like they felt guilty about whatever they had to do. I think we should hear their side of the story
All characters are open for asks! (Note that some may be uncompliant)
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Before the Anger- episode 36, "Apologies."
I didn't mean to give Gaster sass in his final panel. Please. Don't be like my friend and thirst over him. I deeply regret and apologize for what I've done.
((--So she was. All through the process of being assigned the caretaker, people looked right at her and called her “Elaine.” She’d never felt such a feeling before. All the way to Papyrus’s house, hearing the door open, seeing his face; he smiled and said, “Elaine, it’s nice to meet you!”))
Hey Papyrus is in this side story! He's my favorite
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Broccoli Soup is back! (It's a comic I really like. Read it) To celebrate, I'm finally posting this old fanart I made.
I love this comic it has everything I like in a story. The psychology and style is so awesome and never fails to inspire me :) I'm so glad it's back!
@somesecretpie is the creator.
Don't mind my horrible handwriting. I didn't want to type it bc it would've subtracted from the meaning of the drawing, but in return I had to rewrite it like 1000 times to be legible lmao
Before the Anger- episode 35, "...No. (pt. 2)"
((Elaine had a stupid look on her face; brow furrowed, eyes wide. She had never been asked that before. Elaine inhaled, fixed her face, and looked Undyne right in the eye, “Elaine. I want to be called Elaine.”))
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Before the Anger- episode 34, "...No. (pt. 1)"
Does this episode look different to you? If so, you are right. This was actually the first episode I ever made of BTA. I was testing the comic style and didn't think how much my style would change. So it's a bit odd, but I tried my best to edit it so its less jarring.
((Seeing as the conversion was finished, Elaine started to leave, but was stopped by Undyne. “Wait,” she said, “I need a name to refer to you as.” Elaine made a dreadful sigh, knowing this question would come up. “Legally? ‘Elaine’. But nobody has ever called me that before.”
“So what do they call you?” Undyne asked. Elaine shook her head and started a list, “Kid, Armless, Trippy, little Jailbird… really anything you can think of. It was the same with my mom and sister. I never even learned what their real names were.” Undyne tilted her head, shocked, “What a strange tradition. What about you? What do you WANT to be called?”))
A double decker for today's side story! This one is almost over. Afterwards, we'll start a new side story (in my opinion, a much cooler one)
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My new story! It would be awesome if u could check it out! (I'm working so hard and I need to be validated)
Since this is the first episode, I'll put the important info for asks here. However, in the future, they will be the pinned post on my blog!
In this comic, the askers (that's you!) assume the role of random wandering ghosts. This is only for the sake of narrative: however, if you want to roleplay or otherwise flesh out your little ghost character, you may do so in the comment section. Just please keep the ask box reserved for "asks" only!
You can ask me- the creator (my name is Bri Jo)- some questions, but I generally want this blog to be centered around the comic's storyline and characters.
When you are asking something, please specify somewhere who you are talking to! This will avoid confusion for all of us :) This comic doesn't strictly follow FNaF lore! Somethings that are cannon in FNaF didn't happen in Mr. Sleepy.
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This is a FNaF AU comic that you can influence with your asks (I'm sure you've picked that up by now). It follows Chica as the main character and her friends- Foxy, Bonnie, and Freddy- as they try to figure out their mysterious past. They have been trapped in Mr. Sleepy's Daycare for thirty years and are now desperate, bored, and a little crazy. Alongside them, little wandering ghosts without vessels ask them questions. Each animatronic has their own debilitating curse, and their tormentor, Miss Spring, is hellbent on getting the animatronics all on her level- by getting them to kill an innocent person. She has already gotten two of them.
- what if nobody asks questions? (or I don't like their questions?)
- any tips?
- how often should I post?
- how should I do the introduction?
- any etiquette I should know?
- would anyone even read it!?
- WHAT DO I DO IF NOBODY READS IT?
The comic would be a FNaF AU called "Mr. Sleepy: ask anything" on a side blog. It's about the four animatronics trying to figure out their past and how to get out of the abandoned daycare. The story is pretty different from the original game; the restaurant is a daycare; William is the good guy while Henry Emily is bad; Vanny is some weird god demon; and its generally an older vibe of FNaf, like before all the crazy lore. Obviously there is more to it but overall it's simple. Chica is the main character. The "askers" would be wandering ghosts (there are a lot of dead kids) Heres a poster of the characters:
(Don't mind Freddy he looks kinda weird in this drawing) Would anyone read this? Or even ask questions? Should I just jump in and do it or not?
Sneak peek of Siqua's lore!
In a few episodes, this will make sense, but I'm impatient so I posted it now :)
Im in a bit of an art rut... I have yet for inspiration to hit me. The art style for my comic is very simple and I've been drawing in it so much that I find it difficult to draw in my normal style now 😅 i guess its a good and a bad thing.
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Before the Anger- episode 33, "Trick-or-Treating"
A Halloween special in February? Of course not, this is an archive, remember?
Gaster is surprisingly compliant with such a childish holiday. He even gave the bare minimum!
Costumes: Siqua and Undyne are Lady Doris and Broccoli from one of my favorite comics, Broccoli Soup! (by @somesecretpie) Papyrus, it would have been very easy to put him in his UT fit, but everyone is expecting that. So, he is Goldie from my FNaF AU, Virus Tears. Gaster and Sans are just simple costumes (but peanut is a reference to peanut sans lol)
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I just read all of BTA and I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!
I love how you portray Alphys, and I love Siqua and the others as well! (funk Gaster tho) Their interactions are so fun to read.
The story is so interesting too and the art style is awesome. Keep up the good work!! ♡
Omg thank you!!! (And yes, you are right about Gaster... He gets even worse)
My favorite thing about writing is dialogue and psychology, so I'm glad you noticed😁 tysm for saying this it was so nice 😭❤